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the wound

in my heart

from everywhere

around/inside me

but..

like the soft
chime of bells

a whisper
of peace

as blood
has power

as waves
of galaxies

spiral
star child
of mine.
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a discordant song

Contributed by ming on Saturday, 9th February 2019 @ 11:30:42 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

of grief

the wound

in my heart

from everywhere

around/inside me

but..

like the soft
chime of bells

a whisper
of peace

as blood
has power

as waves
of galaxies

spiral
star child
of mine.

Copyright © ming ... [ 2019-02-09 23:30:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: a discordant song (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 10th February 2019 @ 02:02:51 AM AEST
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ming, I love this. I have missed your poems which spring outward with delicate truths.

obviously, quantum physics is way beyond my own understanding of this world and beyond.

take the tiniest thing and how it acts upon any movement, all matter, the creation of matter itself, etc...

and then, life itself, unimaginable, immeasurable,
a living breathing thinking creature, and just how
is that even possible---

a pulse, a sound, eyes to see, a thinking brain,
and then, poetry.

ming, your poems are short and yet intriguing
every time. Thanks for writing!
Peace!

Re: a discordant song (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 13th February 2019 @ 12:55:41 AM AEST
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Muppetman said it well, this IS intriguing. The way you compare the intricacies of the universe with the intricacies of the human heart is genius. I love quantum physics, although I am poorly equipped to understand it all. I also loved this poetic gem you have penned here.

Very well done.
Barkeep! A drink for my oh so intelligent friend!

Raker

Re: a discordant song (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Wednesday, 13th February 2019 @ 03:10:16 AM AEST
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Pure Ming. Timeless and beautiful. You are a master of saying much while writing little.

You know I am a devoted fan of yours, Ming. Keep the magic coming please.

Mike

Re: a discordant song (User Rating: 1 )
by Jecks on Monday, 18th February 2019 @ 06:04:44 PM AEST
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It`s often the littlest things that bring meaning and some semblance of peace to those bigger discordant things in our lives. Interesting take on quantum physics.

Re: a discordant song (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Sunday, 27th October 2019 @ 11:34:02 PM AEST
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If time is illusionary
Non linear is only a useful representation of an conceptual conceivable construct of time as a self contained reproducing fractal, maybe?? And entanglement is quantum
At a distance faster than light speed information transfer.
Then fractal entanglement of information should be a function of non linear time as we think of it because the singularity as a fractal contains its self infinitely entanglement of time space?
Rosen Bridge connection? pulsars quazars curvature redirection of light refraction collapse mirror imaging wave function collapse? Perhaps? I wish I knew

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