Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	16-May 22:22:00 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 185861 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This My Dear Is True [time] => 2019-02-05 16:48:06 [hometext] => In the Invierno Style.... [bodytext] => Broken down
Uninspired
You`re unaware
You`re my sole desire
From afar
You I admire
Until I obtain your love
I`ll never tire
With obsessive conviction
You`re my addiction
Rather be had
Than sad
Rather be taken
Than mistaken
My heart only beats for you
This my dear is true [comments] => 4 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 22 [informant] => jamesstockdale [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

This My Dear Is True

Contributed by jamesstockdale on Tuesday, 5th February 2019 @ 04:48:06 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Broken down
Uninspired
You`re unaware
You`re my sole desire
From afar
You I admire
Until I obtain your love
I`ll never tire
With obsessive conviction
You`re my addiction
Rather be had
Than sad
Rather be taken
Than mistaken
My heart only beats for you
This my dear is true

Copyright Â© jamesstockdale ... [ 2019-02-05 16:48:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: This My Dear Is True (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 6th February 2019 @ 10:59:02 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This is great, Mr. Me!!! Flow, meter, everything!!!

Mr. Mykey is a good influence on you.

Kisses and hugs, Mr. Me 😋

Re: This My Dear Is True (User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on Thursday, 7th February 2019 @ 01:54:03 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Love it! Short, sweet, and effective. You painted the picture perfectly and it didn’t take a manifesto to do so (pardon the unintentional in-sentence rhyme). Not to mention, Invierno is an honored writer in my book, and your emulation is splendid. Take care and God bless,

Deidra

Re: This My Dear Is True (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Thursday, 7th February 2019 @ 04:38:30 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I see you choose to follow the leaders here!
That is the adventure of writing in a group...we are welcome to try on others styles!
This swift little tale is complete and compact. You do not waste words, James.
My favorite line is RATHER BE TAKEN THAN MISTAKEN. I wonder if we should try it the other way around?
softerware

Re: This My Dear Is True (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 10th February 2019 @ 09:11:29 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

the more you venture out Jamesstockdale
the better your writing gets.
Invierno Style,
is hard to discern, I/'/ve read
his practice story, it was good,
he can write for a living one day,
but, there are a lot of people out
there who do write.
People actually go to university
to write.
Vangogh/'/s last words,
"The sadness will last forever"
the way anyone might feel,
just plain, and ordinary
the time is golden
imparted upon the soul
vibrant to the eyes appeal
one is wrong to compare
simply to compare
simply to want

Peace!

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. Â©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright Â© to their submitter. All the rest Copyright Â© 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com