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[aid] => mick
[title] => I left
[time] => 2019-02-04 02:16:52
[hometext] => Expressing my emotions towards my divorce. I haven/'/t wrote or posted in a long time.
[bodytext] => September 24th 2018
Laying here contemplating life,
Wandering how I went from being a wife.
To single and living back at home.
No longer with a life partner, but alone.
I was looking for a sign of what to do,
But I didn/'/t think it would be a who.
The sign was as obvious as could be,
I would be blind not to see.
I left.
You didn/'/t believe I would do it.
But you kept stomping on my heart, you broke it.
Piece by piece, shard by shard.
Leaving you should been hard.
I left.
I went to work the next day.
I didn/'/t know what to say,
Many times I sat in my car and cried.
Tears that I had to dry and hide.
Not tears for you, but tears for the journey ahead.
Because my heart had already been broken and bled.
I left
I sat down with a lawyer on our anniversary,
Since you did your deed on my birthday, with no mercy.
I thought it would make me sad, but I was relieved.
I left with the divorce proceedings achieved.
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I left
Contributed by
little_genna
on
Monday, 4th February 2019 @ 02:16:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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September 24th 2018
Laying here contemplating life,
Wandering how I went from being a wife.
To single and living back at home.
No longer with a life partner, but alone.
I was looking for a sign of what to do,
But I didn/'/t think it would be a who.
The sign was as obvious as could be,
I would be blind not to see.
I left.
You didn/'/t believe I would do it.
But you kept stomping on my heart, you broke it.
Piece by piece, shard by shard.
Leaving you should been hard.
I left.
I went to work the next day.
I didn/'/t know what to say,
Many times I sat in my car and cried.
Tears that I had to dry and hide.
Not tears for you, but tears for the journey ahead.
Because my heart had already been broken and bled.
I left
I sat down with a lawyer on our anniversary,
Since you did your deed on my birthday, with no mercy.
I thought it would make me sad, but I was relieved.
I left with the divorce proceedings achieved.
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2019-02-04 02:16:52] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I left
(User Rating: 1 ) by Deidra_Carmichael on
Monday, 4th February 2019 @ 02:32:14 AM AEST (User
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Man, this one really was a heart-wrencher for me. I haven’t read a poem so emotionally charged and meaningful to me in a while. You’ve painted a tragic yet beautiful picture of overcoming such a hurdle. Great work, blessings to you,
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Re: I left
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 4th February 2019 @ 02:49:10 AM AEST (User
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I second Deidra here and just earlier I commented on some of your earlier poems and they touched me.
God Bless You! |
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Re: I left
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jecks on
Monday, 4th February 2019 @ 02:10:30 PM AEST (User
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Hoping you*ve gotten through the toughest part and the road ahead eventually gets easier.
Great job incorporating the rhyme while maintaining the strong emotions. |
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Re: I left
(User Rating: 1 ) by ingeniusidiot on
Thursday, 7th February 2019 @ 12:36:49 PM AEST (User
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I have to agree with Deidra. The fact that you are
able to write about heart wrenching and tragic
experience shows that you are on a path to a better
place. God Bless you and my prayers are with you.
Rich |
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