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Array ( [sid] => 185846 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I left [time] => 2019-02-04 02:16:52 [hometext] => Expressing my emotions towards my divorce. I haven/'/t wrote or posted in a long time. [bodytext] => September 24th 2018

Laying here contemplating life,
Wandering how I went from being a wife.
To single and living back at home.
No longer with a life partner, but alone.
I was looking for a sign of what to do,
But I didn/'/t think it would be a who.
The sign was as obvious as could be,
I would be blind not to see.

I left.

You didn/'/t believe I would do it.
But you kept stomping on my heart, you broke it.
Piece by piece, shard by shard.
Leaving you should been hard.

I left.

I went to work the next day.
I didn/'/t know what to say,
Many times I sat in my car and cried.
Tears that I had to dry and hide.
Not tears for you, but tears for the journey ahead.
Because my heart had already been broken and bled.

I left

I sat down with a lawyer on our anniversary,
Since you did your deed on my birthday, with no mercy.
I thought it would make me sad, but I was relieved.
I left with the divorce proceedings achieved.

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I left

Contributed by little_genna on Monday, 4th February 2019 @ 02:16:52 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



September 24th 2018

Laying here contemplating life,
Wandering how I went from being a wife.
To single and living back at home.
No longer with a life partner, but alone.
I was looking for a sign of what to do,
But I didn/'/t think it would be a who.
The sign was as obvious as could be,
I would be blind not to see.

I left.

You didn/'/t believe I would do it.
But you kept stomping on my heart, you broke it.
Piece by piece, shard by shard.
Leaving you should been hard.

I left.

I went to work the next day.
I didn/'/t know what to say,
Many times I sat in my car and cried.
Tears that I had to dry and hide.
Not tears for you, but tears for the journey ahead.
Because my heart had already been broken and bled.

I left

I sat down with a lawyer on our anniversary,
Since you did your deed on my birthday, with no mercy.
I thought it would make me sad, but I was relieved.
I left with the divorce proceedings achieved.





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Re: I left (User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on Monday, 4th February 2019 @ 02:32:14 AM AEST
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Man, this one really was a heart-wrencher for me. I haven’t read a poem so emotionally charged and meaningful to me in a while. You’ve painted a tragic yet beautiful picture of overcoming such a hurdle. Great work, blessings to you,

Deidra


Re: I left (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Monday, 4th February 2019 @ 02:49:10 AM AEST
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I second Deidra here and just earlier I commented on some of your earlier poems and they touched me.
God Bless You!


Re: I left (User Rating: 1 )
by Jecks on Monday, 4th February 2019 @ 02:10:30 PM AEST
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Hoping you*ve gotten through the toughest part and the road ahead eventually gets easier.
Great job incorporating the rhyme while maintaining the strong emotions.


Re: I left (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Thursday, 7th February 2019 @ 12:36:49 PM AEST
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I have to agree with Deidra. The fact that you are
able to write about heart wrenching and tragic
experience shows that you are on a path to a better
place. God Bless you and my prayers are with you.

Rich




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