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Shaping the Curve
Contributed by
spike
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Sunday, 27th January 2019 @ 12:22:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It’s a love affair,
the waves and sand:
the neap tide a gentle hand
shaping the curve.
the high waves of tension,
carving the beach face:
from swash zone to wrack line,
the berm tries to hold place.
it’s love and passion,
ocean to land:
building and wasting,
scripted in sand.
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spike
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2019-01-27 12:22:45]
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Re: Shaping the Curve
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by Zaf_Stud on
Sunday, 27th January 2019 @ 07:14:47 PM AEST
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A cool write. A figurative expression of love deep as the sea!
Keep writing! |
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Re: Shaping the Curve
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 29th January 2019 @ 01:35:16 AM AEST
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Yes indeed a timeless romance.
What a great flow. |
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Re: Shaping the Curve
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by Jecks on
Thursday, 7th March 2019 @ 01:58:08 PM AEST
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Shorelines always tell such intricate and amazing stories.
Love the imagery in this. |
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Re: Shaping the Curve
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by alicewhite on
Saturday, 21st September 2019 @ 07:44:26 AM AEST
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| At waters edge tears reside honey moon dew drip sip upon ripples upon tide i am i am iam revelation?? |
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Re: Shaping the Curve
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by windowguy on
Tuesday, 12th October 2021 @ 09:04:46 PM AEST
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| A fascinating poem. I especially liked the last line. |
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