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A Universal Vacation
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
on
Saturday, 26th January 2019 @ 09:46:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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The moving walkway exit is approaching
These words usher me into a new land
Where fun is the agenda and bliss is the plan
I step out onto the concrete ground
Letting the warm sunlight immerse me all around
Passing Toothsome/'/s Chocolate Emporium and Hard Rock Cafe
I decide how I/'/ll start the day
Islands of Adventure is the thrilling park
While the vintage beauty of Studios just sweeps me away
Each stride brings opportunity
To let my imagination run free
CityWalk is the final destination
On my itinerary
Though I longed to dine at Toothsome/'/s
My dreams were put to rest
I should/'/ve made a reservation
Knowing that they/'/re the best
Not to fear I made my way to NBC/'/s Sports Bar and Grille
Where the food is awesome
And 80s music plays all night long
The experience is truly a thrill
The drive back to the house was a time of reflection
Reminding me that this was one day of many
That characterized the adventure and delight
I experienced on a Universal Vacation
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Deidra_Carmichael
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2019-01-26 21:46:56]
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Re: A Universal Vacation
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 26th January 2019 @ 10:28:53 PM AEST
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| Sounds great and very well written. It was as if we were there with you. Awesome is a great word. Sounds like you/'/ll be back. We all need some fun in our lives. Here/'/s hoping many more vacations come your way! |
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Re: A Universal Vacation
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by Zaf_Stud on
Sunday, 27th January 2019 @ 07:23:44 PM AEST
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A beautiful depiction of a captivating place!
Particularly this stanza is just lovely:
"Though I longed to dine at Toothsome/'/s
My dreams were put to rest
I should/'/ve made a reservation
Knowing that they//'//re the best "
Thanks for sharing a good time with us!
Keep travelling, keep writing.. ;-) |
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