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Heartbeats Ricochet
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Monday, 27th August 2018 @ 05:46:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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you kissed me and I melted into you
you touched me and I softened through and through
you gripped me tight and then you cut right through
we`re setting fires
and putting them out
we`re on the edge
and going all out
we`re losing breath
and breathing life in
we`re falling fast
ready to begin
I found you and I dove into your sea
ignited burning sensuality
I`m loving every inch of you I see
we`re fanning flames
`cause we love the heat
we`re leaving marks
your scent on my sheets
not letting go
lips begging to stay
your hands on me
heartbeats ricochet
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MoonlitAngel
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2018-08-27 05:46:08]
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Re: Heartbeats Ricochet
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Wednesday, 29th August 2018 @ 09:53:46 PM AEST
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Passionate, revealing the wonders of the heart, and how they play out when two people come together. Very much how I picture my wedding night *blushes*. A splendid job,
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Re: Heartbeats Ricochet
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 31st August 2018 @ 10:18:20 PM AEST
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There is certainly an intensity and passion evident in this, it flows like molten lava onto the page
You ended it perfectly with the closing line
"Heartbeats ricochet"
Great write
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