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Nighttime
Contributed by
arthur
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Tuesday, 7th June 2016 @ 06:04:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Nighttime We take off one shoe at a time One sock at a time Undress Tired Lazily No zest
We slew a dragon today Had our share of loves and dislikes Survived confrontation And for this, we buried the hatchet Turned over the garden Schemed against society
It was a full ride And when I turn The lights out I will meet you in my dream world
Copyright ©
arthur
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2016-06-07 18:04:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Nighttime
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th June 2016 @ 03:00:45 AM AEST (User
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Hmmmm, wow! That is a full ride!
Nicely done and welcome to YPDC.
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Re: Nighttime
(User Rating: 1 ) by RussellReinhardt on
Thursday, 9th June 2016 @ 12:31:54 PM AEST (User
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Hi there
Yes these day it does seem as if we have just to much on our plate. Nice write, made me think a bit. Oh yes welcome to the club
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Re: Nighttime
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th June 2016 @ 11:12:50 PM AEST (User
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cool
the full ride
lights out
meet you on the other side
you must be an inventor
long time
excellent poem!
Thank you!
Peace! |
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Re: Nighttime
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spike on
Friday, 10th June 2016 @ 12:53:00 AM AEST (User
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a sweet, world-weary homage to the love that endures, the ties that bind.
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Re: Nighttime
(User Rating: 1 ) by ming on
Thursday, 16th June 2016 @ 05:19:34 PM AEST (User
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Nice. Hope to see more.
ming |
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