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Swirls of Black and Red
Contributed by
javab
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Wednesday, 7th May 2014 @ 11:13:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Swirls of black and red
Come join us is what they said
Theres no more happiness in the rain
And all thats left is anger and pain
Racing to the end but nothings there
Its all ok cause I dont care
Im sure this is not the place I know
Curtains close. Theres no more show
Gone are the days of ease
With fading smiles that pretend to please
Bleeding color in world thats fake
Its all over. Time to wake
The fake world has begun to crack
And all the crayons have turned to black
So whats left inside my head?
Swirls of black and red
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2014-05-07 11:13:32]
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Re: Swirls of Black and Red
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 7th May 2014 @ 11:29:04 AM AEST
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beautifully written, great images,
welcome to ypdc:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Swirls of Black and Red
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by TheDreamer on
Thursday, 8th May 2014 @ 12:18:15 AM AEST
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You are very talented.
I hope to see more of your work :) |
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