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Array ( [sid] => 168367 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => PLEASANT DREAM FANTASY [time] => 2011-11-05 17:10:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Climbing the steps in a pouring rain,
That led up to the train.
A woman just behind me,
Who was also dripping wet,
She slipped and fell and I could tell
She needed help to stand back up.
As I reached my hand out to Lift her,
She looked up into my eyes.
A tingle then shot through me,
As she began to tantalize.

She wouldn't let go of my hand.
She pulled me another way.
And when she found her cabin,
She told me to come and play.
Her soaking clothes fell to the floor,
As I fell down to my knees
I asked her not to tease me.
But she giggled and said "oh please!"
She grabbed my shirt and pulled it out,
From my pants where it was tucked.
She unzipped my pants and looked at me,
And commanded "now lets rock!"

I stood with mouth wide open.
It happened way too fast.
As she grabbed me with
Both hands and then
She pulled me toward her couch.
I did not want to be there.
I remember me feeling trapped.
But as I warmed up to it,
I decided “what the crap.”
Then she began to to undress me,
And I thought this would be fine,
When the porter knocked on the cabin
Saying, "Your laundry please Ms Devine!"
The alarm clock started ringing.
As it was my wake up time.
Good thing It did cause this here kid,
Was about to wet the bed!
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PLEASANT DREAM FANTASY

Contributed by robert_edgar_burns on Saturday, 5th November 2011 @ 05:10:52 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

Climbing the steps in a pouring rain,
That led up to the train.
A woman just behind me,
Who was also dripping wet,
She slipped and fell and I could tell
She needed help to stand back up.
As I reached my hand out to Lift her,
She looked up into my eyes.
A tingle then shot through me,
As she began to tantalize.

She wouldn't let go of my hand.
She pulled me another way.
And when she found her cabin,
She told me to come and play.
Her soaking clothes fell to the floor,
As I fell down to my knees
I asked her not to tease me.
But she giggled and said "oh please!"
She grabbed my shirt and pulled it out,
From my pants where it was tucked.
She unzipped my pants and looked at me,
And commanded "now lets rock!"

I stood with mouth wide open.
It happened way too fast.
As she grabbed me with
Both hands and then
She pulled me toward her couch.
I did not want to be there.
I remember me feeling trapped.
But as I warmed up to it,
I decided “what the crap.”
Then she began to to undress me,
And I thought this would be fine,
When the porter knocked on the cabin
Saying, "Your laundry please Ms Devine!"
The alarm clock started ringing.
As it was my wake up time.
Good thing It did cause this here kid,
Was about to wet the bed!

Copyright Â© robert_edgar_burns ... [ 2011-11-05 17:10:52]
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