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Help me - Somebody Please Help Me

Contributed by Terry_Stephen_Driscoll on Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 02:38:49 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



“What are those marks David?”
(Help me)
“I said what are those marks”
(Help me)
“Where did the bruises come from?”
(Help me)
“They look like fingers”
(Help me)
“Large fingers, adult fingers”
(Help me)
“Is that a burn? Oh my god!”
(Help me)
“David is that a cigarette burn?”
(Help me)
“These cuts on your back”
(Help me)
“They’re all too uniform”
(Help me)
“How are things at home?”
(Help me)
“You know, with your parents?”
(Help me)
“Do you need to talk to someone?”
(Help me)
“Is it too painful to say?”
(Help me)
“I can arrange council for you”
(Help me)
“Just say the word”
(Help me)
“There are tears in your eyes”
(Help me)
“We can help you David”
(Help me)
“We want to help you David”
(Help me)
"What do you say?"
(Help me)
"David! I said what do you say?"
“I’m fine, its nothing.”
(Help me, please somebody help me)




Copyright © Terry_Stephen_Driscoll ... [ 2002-08-01 02:38:49]
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Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 02:50:50 AM AEST
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I could never forget this one. It speaks, loudly, for itself. You're a caring soul, Mr D.
Love Chrissie xx


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by chatabox on Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 05:44:59 AM AEST
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yes, this made the hairs on the back of my neck stand up again...cant bear it...I work with kiddies and its something I keep an eye out for........
exceptional write Terry

Pen.


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by humphdj on Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 06:56:44 AM AEST
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Previous reading of this don't help..........it's still as haunting
Excellent write

Rgds
Dave


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 11:12:49 AM AEST
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yes, this write is very awed. what isn't said, is what they need, what they say, isn't at all what they mean. How often I've been put in that situation of those who will say that exact thing and really need your help, often protecting the one who did this. A sad but reality write of many who go thru this, and have so... can relate very well.......
AMber Rose


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Brooke on Friday, 2nd August 2002 @ 05:02:25 AM AEST
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This is a very powerful poem Terry. It sent chills down my spine...

Brooke


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Patricia_Petro on Friday, 2nd August 2002 @ 08:36:39 AM AEST
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Terry,
Still powerful the second time around. Soooo worth repeating. Sends chills up and down the spine.
~Patricia xx


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by Ramfire on Friday, 2nd August 2002 @ 11:49:18 PM AEST
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Hi Terry,
Powerful words. I like the way you repeat the words: "Help me." This really impacts me.

Always,
Laurie


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Holly on Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 11:10:28 AM AEST
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This has to be the most haunting thing I've ever read. Some of us, more than others may read this and remember......


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Cypher on Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 12:04:32 PM AEST
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gave me chills... brings back some bad memories. I'll never forget....


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by princesspurty on Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 09:26:21 AM AEST
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this is so sad, but very well put, it is a shame people cant seek help when they need it the most, but at times you never know if it will be for the best or not, keep up the great work!


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by jessie_messie on Tuesday, 3rd September 2002 @ 08:59:25 AM AEST
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i love it!!!!!!


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Wednesday, 18th September 2002 @ 01:56:29 AM AEST
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Very well written Terry,
If only it were this easy in real life to read between the lines!

With love
Dean :-)


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 21st September 2002 @ 08:34:45 AM AEST
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This one always tears my heart apart. As an educator....I just can't imagine. Wow..I have read this so many times and it still gets me. Great write. Unfortunate topic.
-LJ


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by chrissy on Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 07:20:48 AM AEST
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This made me cry. ITS nice to know that people do know what going on on the world today.
chrissy


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 04:42:09 PM AEST
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This poem really hit home
with me, i dont think i've cried
this hard in a long while
This sends a message
so very loud!
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by lost_word on Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 05:26:05 PM AEST
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this was a great write, i loved the way u put (help me), like it was a silent cry for help.


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 05:36:54 AM AEST
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i don't know what to say...i wanted to tell you how good it is but i don't really think there's much point...all i can say is i relate to this, and i know how hard it is to hide. beautifully written, it touched something right inside me


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by MnMnMsrcool on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 11:51:41 AM AEST
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omg!!! that was so good! that gave me chills down my spine! man o man! good job keep writin!


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Panther_1978 on Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 05:11:18 AM AEST
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It sent chills down my spine too! Wow! Good Write

Panther


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Love_letters on Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 02:56:48 PM AEST
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It pains me to think that this could be true. But it was written quite well nonetheless.


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Merd on Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 08:52:38 PM AEST
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Oh, wow, so powerful. I really loved this poem. It shows so much how people, though they want help, they can't ask for it.


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by MoonLite on Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 07:50:14 PM AEST
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whoa..thats all i can say


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 08:32:26 PM AEST
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excellent poem just shows we have to step in when we see something like that. Very strong message good write


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by georgelynyrd920 on Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 06:48:13 PM AEST
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Oh man, thats was quite good, and sometimes very true. I work in a hospital and i see things like this and when one puts it like you did, people see that it can happen and does. good job!!


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Olddarkme on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 07:11:27 PM AEST
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I love this one. It's very unique in it's style. The subject of child abuse and the inner fear, panic and pain of the child is nicely expressed.


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by Eloise on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 04:13:57 AM AEST
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this is a really awesome poem...


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 10:08:35 AM AEST
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Where are the Social Workers, neigbours, scholteachers, freinds ? Minding our own business? Not getting invoved? Passing by on the other side?


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 10:08:43 AM AEST
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Where are the Social Workers, neigbours, scholteachers, freinds ? Minding our own business? Not getting invoved? Passing by on the other side?


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by maria_mendonez_ibardolas on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 08:34:18 AM AEST
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This is very unique.It sad with a lot of powerful emotions in this poem.I felt sad and felt that something is going on with this poem that someone really is needing help in reality.Wish I can help.May God Bless you and help you or whoever.I feel sad. :(


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 03:35:04 AM AEST
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haunting, eerie, spine-chilling and an absolutely amazingly accurate portrayal of an abused child... excellent...


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by TheSpiritx on Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 03:37:38 AM AEST
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Excellence.


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 06:02:52 AM AEST
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oh my god im choking on my tears this was just so.... i cant say beautiful as in like love poetry but it was beautiful in a really sad tear-jerker sort of way if u get what i mean. as soon as i read the first line by the end i knew i would cry.


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 01:16:36 PM AEST
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dearest terry, i remember when you first posted this, *shivers* how did he eventually faire? i hope by now he has been helped! hugs n' love to you and yours, always nessa


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by Former_Member on Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 08:18:21 PM AEST
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How can something so beautiful be born from something so horrific? Totally terrifying, very powerful and hopefully will reach one person that will refuse to let this happen to a child in need out of sheer apathy or fear of reprisal to themselves.


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Desi on Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 06:49:46 PM AEST
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Its touching. I hope David got help. You have a poetic soul. Its sad, but good.


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by BlackFire9786 on Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 10:23:07 PM AEST
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This sent chills down my spine.....brings back memories, but i love it! if only reading between the lines were that easy in real life...this sent chills down my spine, how i can relate to it! I love it. and i'm on my way to read it again. wow. just wow.


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 11:12:50 PM AEST
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I like this and I wont forget this


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by JusMeOtay on Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 12:30:31 AM AEST
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wow...I loved it. Really good job getting the point across with two souls there. Wonderful


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by Former_Member on Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 12:05:56 AM AEST
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Firstly, you wrote well. But I hope that this is not happening round you... People sometimes will act strong. What is said may not bethe truth... But we cant blame them... Can others really help when we tell them the truth? We all try to solve our own problems... If someone really wanna help, they should find the answers themselves if we want them to. Or leave it for us to solve it ourself


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by stargazer on Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 08:19:33 PM AEST
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WOW... I have shivers up my spine. I am left at a loss for words... I am not sure as to what I am expected to say. Can my words convey the thoughts I have right now. I guess all I can say is... wow, that was amazing. I am touched. And I am left speechless.

-Amy


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by tinka_belle on Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 07:52:46 AM AEST
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you poem truely touched me
i know what its like
the school, they ask if you want a councelor
they say that they can help
but they never really hear you saying, pleading, screaming "help me" do they
and when you're so scared to speak
its like thats when they are at their deafest


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Asatru on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 10:53:35 AM AEST
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I completely feel this poem. It's as if I'm in it, sounds like me, the kid saying help me. It's like you want to ask, but you cant tell anyone anything. I mean my parents dont physically attack me, well not often... but mental attacks are made everyday and I'm tempted to slit the wrists because of the welts on my brain...sorry. I feel this poem as if I'm that kid wanting to say help me, but jsut not asking.


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by PixiePuff on Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 11:15:57 PM AEST
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so real and so sad... it made my breath catch in my throat.


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by stylle on Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 03:07:12 PM AEST
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All I can say is wow. Pure simplicity with such power. Great work.


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by Pretty_n_pink on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 12:34:45 PM AEST
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this is an outstanding poem! I can relate to alot of it. I grew up with abusive parents myself, and this poem brought back many of my childhood memories...awesome job! keep up the good work!


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by Former_Member on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 01:40:06 PM AEST
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*claps*


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by maryetta on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 12:42:44 AM AEST
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this is very painful to read, but sadly, only to often ignored or not pushed enough.
well written and presented

maryetta


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by PumpkinPie on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 07:53:05 PM AEST
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Wow I felt this poem immmensly too...How sad though..excellent write,
PumpkinPie


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by lilch4ever on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 03:22:33 AM AEST
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That was very sad. I really liked it though. I have witnessed a few who were abused. It's really sad. There are many different ways of abuse. It's just plain old cold no matter what. Loved the style you written this poem in. Very different and unique. Oringally excellent. And hope whoever this person his gets help. Wishes the best for David or you. Well, have a nice day :)


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by kayald on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 10:45:03 PM AEST
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wow...I'm speechless...


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by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 04:17:10 AM AEST
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when i read this, tears formed in my eyes...ive been there....i still am there......i know this i feel this


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by silent on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 12:44:49 PM AEST
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very strong impact, pity it is so true. A haunting poem, loved it.


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by desire on Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 05:07:02 PM AEST
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help me! a cry for help....we all have i pains to bear...i admire the way you have done so... continued blessings and peace to you..slr


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by Former_Member on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 11:37:13 AM AEST
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that is really good. later.


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by lildrama04 on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 03:48:20 PM AEST
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This brought tears to my eyes when I read it. You have a really great talent. I hope that you get help with whatever it is that you are keeping inside of you and always remember you can do all things through christ who loves you know matter who you are or what you have done. Just remember that he died on the cross for your sins.


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by thumper on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 10:57:52 PM AEST
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Haunting and powerful and very reminisce! Keep on writing. I loved/hated it! But that's a good thing. ; 0 )


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by Former_Member on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 03:32:07 AM AEST
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wow this poem kinda scares me.I have kids and never would ever hurt them.I can't think how people can do that to there kids.good poem.


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by Justalady on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 09:58:36 AM AEST
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This brings memories to surface that are indeed painful... I have always assumed that writings such as this come from experience, I hope this is not the case here, but if it is... I pray someone can and does help. Justalady


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by ammalu on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:07:30 AM AEST
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very painful-is it so happens?-passionating too-congrats..


Re: Help me - Somebody Please Help Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 05:39:57 PM AEST
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All I can say is WOW!


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by wray on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:27:56 PM AEST
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'Haunting' is right. I was getting successive chills down my back for 5 minutes after reading the poem...

Christ I just read it again and got another one. Amazing piece. If only all poetry could have this effect on people.


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by babygirl2004 on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 08:50:07 PM AEST
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this poem hits it right on the nail it gave me chills and this happens so often you did an awsome job thank u for


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by RavenShadows on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 04:57:49 PM AEST
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All I can say is...WOW


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by Psyche on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:56:39 AM AEST
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Ouch. That so makes my heart hurt. hurt hurt..


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by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 02:28:41 AM AEST
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I'm crying. Peace to you my brother.


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by bonita2689 on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 08:17:06 PM AEST
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I think this is so true. Sad but true...Nice Job to portray such a sad thing.


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by spyke_420 on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 02:27:08 AM AEST
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This gave me tears in my eyes.....and took me too my past.....very good and deep.

~~Spyke~~


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by Former_Member on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 05:13:42 PM AEST
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The way this poem is written is fantastic! and it is so real, I kno I've played the role of this helpless soul toom nay times too count. I hope you're doing ok, I'm always here if u need to talk


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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 04:03:06 PM AEST
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This poem is so sad, but what makes it more sad, is because it is true...Wonderfully written

Mason


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by Live2Die on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 05:34:40 PM AEST
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Great write. I agree with what every1 is saying. I could never forget this....it made me shiver...it really does speak for itself. Great poem.


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by Former_Member on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 03:37:43 PM AEST
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I ALSO WILL NEVER FORGET THIS ONE,IT GRABBED ME FROM THE START.3 WORDS,WONDERFUL,WONDERFUL,
WONDERFUL


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by TaintedSoul on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 09:35:26 AM AEST
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It can be so hard to voice the help one needs, especially when one is abused (and they are usually threatened with more if they speak out regarding the abuse). Society needs to learn how to listen better, not with only their ears but with their eyes and hearts as well. Profound write.

peace
TS


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by Scarlett on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 06:35:43 AM AEST
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extremely moving, effectively written.

well done


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by In2thetwilightzone on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 04:20:47 AM AEST
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woah that was different, powerful too real AAAAA


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by purity on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 08:18:39 AM AEST
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as a survivor I must say out of the greatest pain comes the greatest beauty . Thanks for being a voice for those who can't speak yet or will never be heard;)


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by smiley_jennyxoxo on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 12:14:09 AM AEST
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That's good. It speaks to me. It's scary though, that people would have guts to do that stuff, but hopefully they also have guts to get put in jail for life instead of just a slap on the wrist... Great Poem! Jenny


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by inoc on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 08:12:28 AM AEST
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Oh how awful....
not the poem itself but the situation....
...I feel so SO sad ... and upset!

*please God make humans keep the Ten Commandments then this kind of abuse
would be non existant!*


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by crazygirl on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 06:31:30 PM AEST
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wow, This really makes you think.Its really sad to think that people feel this way. You truly captured the emotion;i would know. I really wish people didnt have to feel this way, and i hope you are anyone you know hasnt. This poem was great.


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by Skinney86 on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 10:34:52 PM AEST
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Words can't describe how moving that poem is, it speaks Volumes...


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by MissEm on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:45:10 AM AEST
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Wow...chills...so true, so real.
Thank you for sharing
~Emily~


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by hardrocker15198916 on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 02:37:06 PM AEST
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CHRIST that was good ..it spoke brilliant feelings i think you captured it perfectly. it sent chills throo my body


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by blackholesun on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 11:53:29 PM AEST
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um....this worried me.i hope its fiction and your not david gone insane.good poem it made me think and put me in a diff mind frame but it was super sad .i think ill go pray 4 people who feel like that now,peace&love


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by guiltycircles on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 03:42:01 AM AEST
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this is heart-breaking...well written


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by miss_jules on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 01:53:37 PM AEST
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Wow... amazing. The poem itself is so sharp and biting, but the title seems a bit drawn out and does nothing to impact the poem... might change it to something a little more concise.


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by candysears on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 06:48:39 PM AEST
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A very powerful messages here....
I've seen a lot of children afraid to ask for help..
The eyes i think certainly show when someone is crying out for help.
Great write.
God Bless!


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by Wachumiri on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 06:52:08 AM AEST
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I've avoided the poems with most reads simply because of the fact that they had so many. I see now that the majority of poets did know a good poem when they saw it. This brought tears to my heart. It was truly an amazing piece.
Take care.
David


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by Stellar on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 01:41:23 AM AEST
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Whoever rated this less than a 5 is insane.
This was incredible. I really have no other words to say.
Excellent write.

Lizzie


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by Kellros on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 02:47:33 PM AEST
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This sent a chill down my spine, this reality is gruesome but easily denied by the sufferers. This is truly shocking and yet so true...


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by Nickibabe421 on Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 04:58:50 PM AEST
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Such a powerful poem! I felt every word, great job!

Nicki


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by Butterflygirl40 on Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 10:16:00 PM AEST
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wow so sad ..


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by Butterflygirl40 on Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 01:30:10 AM AEST
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I think this is the most saddest poem .. I will

never forget this.....This makes me want to cry.

I was also abused as a child.by my step dad.


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by Spike on Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 07:02:21 AM AEST
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An excellent portrayal of the conflicting impulses in victims of child abuse - the screaming inner voice born of need and the spoken one of denial, born out of fear. A powerful insight.

Spike


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by moon_light on Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 10:31:24 AM AEST
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a fealing i undrestand.


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by purple_vixen on Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 12:31:01 AM AEST
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that is one really, really, really cool poem,


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by ginnginn11 on Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 07:52:36 PM AEST
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oooo thats so sad... its very touching


~toots~


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by Dierna on Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 11:17:33 PM AEST
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It's so true.....I don't know how many times I've said and done the exact same thing......thank you for writing this.


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by Balmain_Tiger on Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 02:50:50 AM AEST
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The lesson all parents try to learn is to listen to their children not just the words spoken. I hope more parents read this and learn.


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by BobbyZimmerman on Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 03:52:18 PM AEST
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Excellent write.


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by allforyou on Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 01:15:54 PM AEST
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so touching.


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by Former_Member on Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 05:08:58 PM AEST
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This poem really speaks to me. I really want someone to help me with my problems but I dont say anything because from past experiences, I always pushed the people who tried to help me away and now I am alone with these problems. This is a great poem!


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by V-I on Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 03:13:54 AM AEST
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Powerful. inspirational. your words
carry much emotion.

thank you. thank you.

V-I


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by sweetkisses0741 on Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 06:34:20 PM AEST
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Wow. This is amazing. It's very simple and yet it has a powerfull meaning. I like it.


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by Linds on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 08:28:45 PM AEST
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wow.....this is chilling. its amazing, has such an impact. I love it.
Lindsay


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by europeanprincess on Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 07:17:26 PM AEST
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what everyone else has said--powerfu and chilling. very sad. thank you for sharing this.


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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 06:57:07 AM AEST
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I found this very upsetting and painful to read, NOT because I have had any experience of it but how it was written ... Excellent write
and hits the heart deep deep within ... Now if only it opens peoples eyes to what can be going on right under their noses .... and even ONE of us gives that help cried out for ....

Amazing

Dee xx


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by brownsugar8272 on Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 02:05:01 AM AEST
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you know I really get the point the parenthesis represent to me what the heart speaks but can not be formed into words. I know what it is to cry out for help with unspoken words. Very touching and inspirational Good Work


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by detourchick on Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 03:57:38 AM AEST
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freakin amazing!


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by Lia on Monday, 28th May 2007 @ 07:42:30 PM AEST
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Ahhh Dearest Terry...all this time and this poem is still in the top 20 most read. Truely an artist indeed! I miss you horribly my friend.


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by missyboo on Thursday, 18th October 2007 @ 12:51:21 AM AEST
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i felt this i wanted to help wonderful read the cards of a player thats a poem that i want my internet love true and thats what i want so help me if you can rate it read it located in the m section and see if you can help me get it


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by TheDarkestofHearts on Thursday, 15th November 2007 @ 02:02:06 PM AEST
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this is a very sad poem. the things we go through and for no good reason. good work!


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by Former_Member on Friday, 5th December 2008 @ 02:58:19 PM AEST
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tragic how children hide their true emotions. a sad reality. exceptional write.


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by Goetzhoke on Saturday, 2nd May 2009 @ 01:55:47 PM AEST
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I wouldnt be able to see how people couldnt understand this writing


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by Sbhottie288 on Sunday, 26th July 2009 @ 09:44:26 PM AEST
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this is absolutely amazing write... very tragic and very emotional


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by Fuzzy on Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 09:18:20 AM AEST
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This sent a shiver down my spine,and a sadness in my heart.


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by andrewhs on Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 08:01:36 AM AEST
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Wow! Poetry at its finest. So powerful.

Congrats Andrewhs


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by Ambivalence on Thursday, 10th December 2009 @ 03:40:54 PM AEST
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a uniquely written poem...
this is a real-life event that's hard to deal with..

take care

-K.Z.


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by VR2776 on Wednesday, 12th January 2011 @ 01:48:45 PM AEST
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left me speechless


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by nachi1981 on Monday, 14th March 2011 @ 07:50:45 PM AEST
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powerful


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by lisasolorio1 on Thursday, 9th February 2012 @ 02:36:33 PM AEST
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Your poem does speak volumns... I work at a court house and unfortunately, not only there but in the media... we hear about this type of crime ALL THE TIME. It's sad to know there are helpless children too afraid to answer the most important question of there lives with honesty.




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