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They will come.
Lovelorn and dusty brained –
their feathers bent,
their eyes wide…
carried forth in the arms
of a inescapable melody;
wanting so to fly.

They will come
quivering and quiet -
like moths to a flame,
drawn by the light,
warmed by the same.
One by one
falling to the earth
before him;
exigent and
in awe.

Yes…
when he calls them-
they will come
bearing the burden
of tomorrow’s memories,
never to be the same.

And there,
with the lot of them
- forever -
he shall remain.

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Veridicality

Contributed by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 03:58:04 PM in AEST
Topic: Tributes

They will come.
Lovelorn and dusty brained –
their feathers bent,
their eyes wide…
carried forth in the arms
of a inescapable melody;
wanting so to fly.

They will come
quivering and quiet -
like moths to a flame,
drawn by the light,
warmed by the same.
One by one
falling to the earth
before him;
exigent and
in awe.

Yes…
when he calls them-
they will come
bearing the burden
of tomorrow’s memories,
never to be the same.

And there,
with the lot of them
- forever -
he shall remain.

Copyright Â© Silent-No-More ... [ 2007-07-21 15:58:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Veridicality (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 05:17:16 PM AEST
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This has a very magnificent feel to it. It strikes out with a sort of importance.

Re: Veridicality (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 06:00:41 PM AEST
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Poignant and beautiful imagery, its difficult to pick out any particular favourite parts, but I adore the first stanza!
Stunning poem,

Dom

Re: Veridicality (User Rating: 1 )
by physcoquack on Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 04:38:54 AM AEST
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it seems you took along time to make it ryme but all the while you seem to have an urgency though the poem

Re: Veridicality (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 10:44:39 AM AEST
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Oh my my my! Snems ... this is amazing to me, if only for the mystery found within the words.
There is also a kind of soft magic floating inside every line. I cannot pretend to know who
it is you speak of, and are giving tribute to, but I like that you have done so in such a
beautifully poetic way. (Gives us greedy readers the chance to bask in the glory of it)

gosh .. I know I mentioned magic earlier .. but wow. I just re-read this and it bears
mentioning again. It really has a magical feel to it that I adore.

This may not be as intended, but this reader found a soft and quite familiar solace
in here. I am comfortable enough to curl up and fall asleep right here between the
words ...

perfectly written, as always ~

*hugs*

~Breezy

Re: Veridicality (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 12:28:18 PM AEST
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truly beautiful, ive read it several times and love it more each time, exquisite writing,

hugs n' love nessa

roses

Re: Veridicality (User Rating: 1 )
by Keilantra on Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 02:33:16 PM AEST
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interesting supernatural write? i dont know, but the beggining was alluring adn teh end was great. once again snem, humbled i am. great write.

~kei

Re: Veridicality (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 23rd July 2007 @ 03:24:41 PM AEST
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I like the way this flows

Re: Veridicality (User Rating: 1 )
by hot-shot on Saturday, 11th August 2007 @ 05:09:32 PM AEST
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nice piece of work

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