[Author's note: Yeh... 'painting' again, I am. Here, in this wonderful virtual place of ours, I suppose this is most appropriately offered in the "Abstract Poetry" category. Others might refer to it as 'Visual Poetry'... or, had I put it on a wall instead of the web, as 'Graffiti Art'. Truth is, I'd rather it on a wall (I see it on a wall)... and I don't particularly care what it's 'called'. To me, it is simply Ariel Screams and it is, as purely as possible, as it was meant to be. My sharing of this is selfish really... I needed to find a method/means/manner to get to what's behind it and, it seems, I am sometimes only able to do so by letting go of what lay in the way. So, yeh... this wall falls first... and then, hopefully, another.]





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Ariel Screams Contributed by Silent-No-More on Wednesday, 27th December 2006 @ 01:07:56 AM in AEST Topic: abstract [Author's note: Yeh... 'painting' again, I am. Here, in this wonderful virtual place of ours, I suppose this is most appropriately offered in the "Abstract Poetry" category. Others might refer to it as 'Visual Poetry'... or, had I put it on a wall instead of the web, as 'Graffiti Art'. Truth is, I'd rather it on a wall (I see it on a wall)... and I don't particularly care what it's 'called'. To me, it is simply Ariel Screams and it is, as purely as possible, as it was meant to be. My sharing of this is selfish really... I needed to find a method/means/manner to get to what's behind it and, it seems, I am sometimes only able to do so by letting go of what lay in the way. So, yeh... this wall falls first... and then, hopefully, another.] ...butthewallwasbothtoobigandtoosmallandtimewasrunningout. Copyright © Silent-No-More ... [ 2006-12-27 01:07:56] (Date/Time posted on site) Advertisments: Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem

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Re: Ariel Screams (User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on Wednesday, 27th December 2006 @ 02:39:17 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) wowwwwww. You know hun I dont know what to write here in a comment because this floored me. I see words in the painting, and have a huge feeling of release and profound depth of emotion just looking at this. Knowing this is so much more than that I dont know what else to say. So I will stop blabbering and sit and stare a moment longer. ~Michelle~

Re: Ariel Screams (User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on Wednesday, 27th December 2006 @ 09:12:23 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Well holy HECK hun!!! What an amazing accomplishment (I'm so jealous!!) The words within .. including the sentence all mushed together at the bottom are SO very telling. I have felt this ... intimately (you KNOW) This has GOT to be damn freeing!! Just a release of which I imagine is the most incredible flight without wings that could ever be known! Exceptional, hun!! You ALWAYS amaze me, but this, THIS is beyond amazed .. I am astonished! Flabbergasted! Staggered! BLOWN AWAY!!! humbled... INCREDIBLY humbled *hugs* ~Breezy

Re: Ariel Screams (User Rating: 1 ) by Spike on Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 04:37:27 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Snem, Daring and very different but too obtuse for this muggle -I got a migraine trying to follow the words on this sub conscious terrain! S

Re: Ariel Screams (User Rating: 1 ) by Whisper on Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 11:17:12 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) That is at really interesting way of expressing your self. And yes the piece suits its title. Whisper

Re: Ariel Screams (User Rating: 1 ) by Willofree on Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 12:26:23 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Wow, this seems over my head.... It does portray an experiantial expression of emotional interaction, including a release of energy. The creativity to even conceptionalize this artistic poetic expression is amazing. There seems to be an interaction and communication between evolving expressions of feelings and thoughts. I am awed by this, snem

Re: Ariel Screams (User Rating: 1 ) by Clarity_Rising on Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 01:48:18 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) I really enjoyed this piece, but I’m afraid that your immense creativity may beyond my scope of reasoning. Whether intentional or not, I like that I am finding pictures with in the picture, and little poems with in a poem. It’s very beautiful, thank you for sharing.

Re: Ariel Screams (User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 07:00:28 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) This is either the work of a genious or a madwoman...or perhaps both, I'll let you decide. lol Chaos, as a concept, fascinates me. In this I see random words scattered among a universe littered with letters....are they there on purpose or are they there by chance? Is there a hidden mesage that , with time, I would understand? Such questions can be asked about mankind, all life in general, and the universe as a whole. This truly is genious.....and REALLY got me rambling. ( winks) Exceptional Roses Larry

Re: Ariel Screams (User Rating: 1 ) by mysterium on Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 12:53:12 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) i have been looking all over this site today and this is the first time i've seen anything like this. very unique! the chalky outline in the middle seems to resemble a hawk ... (the monster? ariel?) screaming in defiance as he swoops stealthily down for his kill. but thats just my perception. good work!

Re: Ariel Screams (User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 02:37:15 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Seems to me ,Snemmy,that you are releasing something hugely powerful here.The solution to the conundrum is beyond me and in the attempt,I almost felt as if I was prying.A very different and fascinating piece, Den

Re: Ariel Screams (User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on Saturday, 10th March 2007 @ 03:06:48 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) This is beyond words, and beyond even image. So therefore it can not be applauded properly with words. Yet understand I am applauding you. I just think words cheapen something that speaks words with few words, such as this piece. SCM

Re: Ariel Screams (User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 1st September 2020 @ 04:01:45 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Awesome...