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Just a shrug and I’ll walk it off
It just took one eye to wink
Just a plug in the hole in my heart
Just a thug trying to play the part
Of a bad dude who never made it far

You look so gentle in white
Like an angel or princess of the night
A beauty so radiant
A mouth so succulent
A smile to absorbent
I want to take it all in
I want to be with you everywhere
Everywhere you have been

Here is another attempt to instill some life
Here is a shot to the arm
To the vein that pumps the juice
To the artery that intakes the prudent fruit
Nourishment for the aching heart
A lucrative investment in the stock
A market had crashed
My value has plummeted
I should be ashamed
Of the malfunction
I tolerated

You look so gorgeous
A spectacle like none before this
A theatrical explorer
The ponderous of stretching my toes
To get any taller
See over the stretched heads
Of those obstructing
Of those reluctant
To go over and talk
To say hello
To rest your head
On my feathery pillow
To lay your body down
Recline
Let the chemistry be mine
Let the minute exceed its time

I can’t say enough
So I simply won’t stop
I can’t touch you harder
So I simply won’t bother
To flatter
Or entertain
The notion you crave
The emotion you tame
A self disciplined
Stand up, kind of man

_______________
___________
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A Crappy Write

Contributed by jyssvw22 on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 01:57:59 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

You look so pretty in pink
Just a shrug and I’ll walk it off
It just took one eye to wink
Just a plug in the hole in my heart
Just a thug trying to play the part
Of a bad dude who never made it far

You look so gentle in white
Like an angel or princess of the night
A beauty so radiant
A mouth so succulent
A smile to absorbent
I want to take it all in
I want to be with you everywhere
Everywhere you have been

Here is another attempt to instill some life
Here is a shot to the arm
To the vein that pumps the juice
To the artery that intakes the prudent fruit
Nourishment for the aching heart
A lucrative investment in the stock
A market had crashed
My value has plummeted
I should be ashamed
Of the malfunction
I tolerated

You look so gorgeous
A spectacle like none before this
A theatrical explorer
The ponderous of stretching my toes
To get any taller
See over the stretched heads
Of those obstructing
Of those reluctant
To go over and talk
To say hello
To rest your head
On my feathery pillow
To lay your body down
Recline
Let the chemistry be mine
Let the minute exceed its time

I can’t say enough
So I simply won’t stop
I can’t touch you harder
So I simply won’t bother
To flatter
Or entertain
The notion you crave
The emotion you tame
A self disciplined
Stand up, kind of man

_______________
___________

Copyright © jyssvw22 ... [ 2005-07-03 01:57:59]
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Re: A Crappy Write (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 02:23:46 AM AEST
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Wow this is such a beautiful poem...I'll take one of your so-called "crappy" writes any damn day mi amigo!! This is so pretty and delicate...I just love your expression here...

Scorp ; )

Re: A Crappy Write (User Rating: 1 )
by CarolinaBlue on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 02:43:27 AM AEST
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WoW! You consider this crap? Well it smells like perfume and looks as beautiful as a bouquet of roses. What a great write! Throw some of that crap this way why don't ya..... ~Blue~

Re: A Crappy Write (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 03:56:05 AM AEST
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if this is crap i would die to see you write something great. to me the only thing crappy about this was the name. very good writing

Re: A Crappy Write (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 09:29:29 PM AEST
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So waiting...for a tune to match-
'Sup with the title though?

Either way.. these words would make
for an awesome tune..
(rock..r&b..whatever)

An awesome write..

B

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