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Scattered pieces made up from it all
A million thoughts run through my mind
But none of which are my own
I have no true identity
What you see
Is the sum of everything
I hold those truths that are known
By some
And provide it for those who know not
I don’t choose who is lead to me
On the path, they came however
Serving fate or destiny
But always arriving
With the same needs
I do what I do
But leaving
They draw their separate conclusions
And go off in their own direction
Taking with them a piece of me
I am a bit of everyone
Scattered pieces made up from it all
A million thoughts run through my mind
But none of which are my own
I have no true identity
What you see
Is the sum of everything [comments] => 3 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 74 [informant] => Onslaught [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => surreal )

Scattered Pieces

Contributed by Onslaught on Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 11:48:07 PM in AEST
Topic: surreal

I am a bit of everyone
Scattered pieces made up from it all
A million thoughts run through my mind
But none of which are my own
I have no true identity
What you see
Is the sum of everything
I hold those truths that are known
By some
And provide it for those who know not
I don’t choose who is lead to me
On the path, they came however
Serving fate or destiny
But always arriving
With the same needs
I do what I do
But leaving
They draw their separate conclusions
And go off in their own direction
Taking with them a piece of me
I am a bit of everyone
Scattered pieces made up from it all
A million thoughts run through my mind
But none of which are my own
I have no true identity
What you see
Is the sum of everything

Copyright © Onslaught ... [ 2005-07-02 23:48:07]
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Re: Scattered Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 12:01:48 AM AEST
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i always enjoy your writing thats why i read them all. Keep up the good poems

Re: Scattered Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 01:20:29 AM AEST
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This is really good Mike. I honestly am lacking of words right now. But i liked this.

Jane xxx

Re: Scattered Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 03:46:43 AM AEST
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unconventional...I can honestly say that I have been within similar circumstances of questioning...
It is a difficult process, yet I think you have expressed yourself rather clearly and effectively.
A thought provoking piece x)

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