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Array ( [sid] => 99832 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Chance To Run [time] => 2005-07-01 19:42:46 [hometext] => Suicide. It is not a great topic but it does happen. If you know someone that has committed suicide it hurts more than anyone can imagine. Here is to anyone that is hurting from something dealing with suicide, and here is to Jaclyn Missey (1989-2005). [bodytext] => Tears drop down her cheeks
As she looks at the mirror
Listening to the evil within her
Saying she's no good
Saying she's awful
Reminding her of the nightmares that haunt her

[CHORUS]
Inside she jumps when she lets out a scream
Don't hurt me
Don't, Don't lie to me
Please just let me be free
I'm sorry for all I've done
Just give me a chance to run

The guilt fills her
The end waits for her
She feels it's time go
Since no one will stand by her
She feels crowded
Yet no one's there
It's the pain that won't leave
And just keeps gathering

Walking down her deserted street
She frantically looks to see who she can meet
Finding a reason
To escape from this evil
That's driving her to do wrong
So close to the end
But yet she's so young
Her life just isn't that simple
So many problems fulfill her
And she know that they won't stop

Her last tear falls to the ground
Along with her future
Along with problems
Along with her life
From six stories highAnd as she was falling
The evil within her
Still kept picking fights with her
And at the same time
A new voice stalked her mind
Telling her this wasn't supposed to be her fate
But it couldn't be changed now
It was too late

[chorus]

Now left behind her
Is her crying father
Feeling the guilt
That was quickly built
Along with the evil inside
Making him want to die [comments] => 5 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 34 [informant] => AmyLee4Ever [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Chance To Run

Contributed by AmyLee4Ever on Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 07:42:46 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Tears drop down her cheeks
As she looks at the mirror
Listening to the evil within her
Saying she's no good
Saying she's awful
Reminding her of the nightmares that haunt her

[CHORUS]
Inside she jumps when she lets out a scream
Don't hurt me
Don't, Don't lie to me
Please just let me be free
I'm sorry for all I've done
Just give me a chance to run

The guilt fills her
The end waits for her
She feels it's time go
Since no one will stand by her
She feels crowded
Yet no one's there
It's the pain that won't leave
And just keeps gathering

Walking down her deserted street
She frantically looks to see who she can meet
Finding a reason
To escape from this evil
That's driving her to do wrong
So close to the end
But yet she's so young
Her life just isn't that simple
So many problems fulfill her
And she know that they won't stop

Her last tear falls to the ground
Along with her future
Along with problems
Along with her life
From six stories highAnd as she was falling
The evil within her
Still kept picking fights with her
And at the same time
A new voice stalked her mind
Telling her this wasn't supposed to be her fate
But it couldn't be changed now
It was too late

[chorus]

Now left behind her
Is her crying father
Feeling the guilt
That was quickly built
Along with the evil inside
Making him want to die




Copyright © AmyLee4Ever ... [ 2005-07-01 19:42:46]
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Re: Chance To Run (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 08:04:19 PM AEST
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OMG you have touched my heart i infact knew a guy who committed sucide while we were in junior high school, this is so touching took me right back to the day i found out. GREAT write

tasha


Re: Chance To Run (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 06:41:40 PM AEST
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this made me cry my best friend commited suicide about 5 years ago and this reminded me of him all the way very sad but touching at the same time


Re: Chance To Run (User Rating: 1 )
by electrique_poet on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 08:29:45 PM AEST
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this is incrediblely touching, every word is filled with emotion and its a very well crafted song, i really liked it

... in words electrique


Re: Chance To Run (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 04:02:32 PM AEST
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terribly tragic, a beautifully written tribute, these lines above all the others are so gripping:
"Her last tear falls to the ground
Along with her future"...

hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-


Re: Chance To Run (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 06:14:16 PM AEST
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Jodi this is a sad, deep and heart breaking song. I'm so sorry for ur loss. It's a tragic life wasted to the evil clutches of suicide. I've been there before and ur song brings back painful memories. Tears form my eyes as ur song touched my heart deeply. A fitting tribute.
Heartfelt hugs,
Dreamer




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