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Array ( [sid] => 99792 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pain [time] => 2005-07-01 11:23:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Hate driven
Blinded by confidence
Lured by thoughts
Filled with self-love

Alone and scared
Pain infested
Wasteful tears
Feeding the drive

Unknown power
Need for control
Aided by opinions
No remorse

Anger hidden
Cannot speak
Fearing loneliness
No place for comfort

Doomed in heart
Changed in mind
No sense of wrong
Dealing by escape

Seeing the good
Loving the old
Chasing pretend
Pain indused

Loathing the inside
Building walls
Love lost
No need for revival

Accepting the words
Hiding the truth
Offering a save
Living in denial

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Pain

Contributed by dorkfish on Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 11:23:10 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

Hate driven
Blinded by confidence
Lured by thoughts
Filled with self-love

Alone and scared
Pain infested
Wasteful tears
Feeding the drive

Unknown power
Need for control
Aided by opinions
No remorse

Anger hidden
Cannot speak
Fearing loneliness
No place for comfort

Doomed in heart
Changed in mind
No sense of wrong
Dealing by escape

Seeing the good
Loving the old
Chasing pretend
Pain indused

Loathing the inside
Building walls
Love lost
No need for revival

Accepting the words
Hiding the truth
Offering a save
Living in denial

Copyright © dorkfish ... [ 2005-07-01 11:23:10]
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Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by BloodyTearDrops on Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 11:49:35 AM AEST
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Nice poem. I like it as i say to all the other people...Great writing. Keep it up.
Chelsey

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 02:05:57 PM AEST
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Nice job with this...I like how it's sort of contradictory. I get a sense of resentment, yet acceptance. Good expression and the format works too.
Scorp.

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by boobiepeach on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 01:35:24 PM AEST
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"Loathing the inside"
Hummm
sounds like it could be about yourself or about another. good job with this poem. emotionally driven. sounds real.

peach

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 03:02:21 PM AEST
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Great write. His thoughts, your thougts every other one. It does sound like you are in denial that it is over and will not be revived. You cannot make someone love you. Even if you could keep him there it would never be like before. He has gone on in his mind without you. It would be a very lonely life for you. Let him go. If he comes back, it was meant to be. If not, you have to move on with your life. The universe continues to turn even if you get stuck in one place refusing to move on. Great write with passionate feelings.

Rita

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 12:35:54 PM AEST
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Really a tough situation....Rita is right though... You should accept it and move on if things don't change soon...
Hugs
Jenni

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