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i have been hiding for days to pass time away
i will burn in hell forever for my sin
i wil never be reborn again
i stopped taking my pills and started cutting more
i lost my life im living bored
i have commited the sin of murder but some sins are foregiven
i fear though not mine and why for i have commited the sin
the sin of suicide [comments] => 4 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 36 [informant] => jtkzlimz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

my ultimate sin

Contributed by jtkzlimz on Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 01:40:33 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

i haved lived in sin these pass few days
i have been hiding for days to pass time away
i will burn in hell forever for my sin
i wil never be reborn again
i stopped taking my pills and started cutting more
i lost my life im living bored
i have commited the sin of murder but some sins are foregiven
i fear though not mine and why for i have commited the sin
the sin of suicide

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Re: my ultimate sin (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 01:44:09 AM AEST
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hmm, pretty good poem...short and sweet, nice job

~Clark

Re: my ultimate sin (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 05:04:20 AM AEST
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i don't know what to say to help you feel better...
i'm speechless...

Re: my ultimate sin (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 09:32:44 PM AEST
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nice write, and i really want to make you feel better- cause i feel like you can be strong. this world needs you to be strong and not commit suicide. we have to fight all of the callings of death... i know it's hard, but we have to try. and i really hope that you don't commit suicide and that you don't hurt yourself! makes me sad to see others in pain :( i wish you the best of luck!!

~sprints

p.s. keep up the good work!

Re: my ultimate sin (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 03:15:14 AM AEST
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I could very well relate to this, but i won't post how. But i did love this poem for good reasons.

Jane xxx

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