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Array ( [sid] => 99772 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Gave it Back [time] => 2005-07-01 01:30:41 [hometext] => i wrote this shortly after a breakup from my first [bodytext] => I gave you my heart but you gave it back broken and shattered...
I gave you my life but you gave it back beaten and battered...
I gave you my feelings but you gave them back disregarded as they faded...
It was you I loved but it seems it was I who you deeply hated...
I gave you everything and more...
But you gave it back as you walked out the door...
I gave you everything in my soul...
But you thew it out as if it were coal...
But remember coal turns into diamonds, but you gave them back...
I gave you me, but yet some how you gave it back...

By: Breana Danyele Steele Age 12 when written [comments] => 2 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 65 [informant] => DefPoetBre07 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )
You Gave it Back

Contributed by DefPoetBre07 on Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 01:30:41 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



I gave you my heart but you gave it back broken and shattered...
I gave you my life but you gave it back beaten and battered...
I gave you my feelings but you gave them back disregarded as they faded...
It was you I loved but it seems it was I who you deeply hated...
I gave you everything and more...
But you gave it back as you walked out the door...
I gave you everything in my soul...
But you thew it out as if it were coal...
But remember coal turns into diamonds, but you gave them back...
I gave you me, but yet some how you gave it back...

By: Breana Danyele Steele Age 12 when written




Copyright © DefPoetBre07 ... [ 2005-07-01 01:30:41]
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Re: You Gave it Back (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 02:30:59 AM AEST
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Hmm, another great write from you, im impressed

~Clark


Re: You Gave it Back (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 08:12:37 PM AEST
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good write i liked it very much,
tasha




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