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Array ( [sid] => 9977 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Pain [time] => 2003-01-08 08:40:00 [hometext] => I wrote this last night. I thought i wud write about cutting myself rather than actually doing it. [bodytext] =>
The blade touches my skin
Feels like a sharp pin

My heart is racing
My mind is chasing

Blood is pumping
My head is thumping

Pain, there is no feeling
Pain, this is healing

I'm setting my sorrows free
And I will guarantee

The pain inside will never end
Slowly as my mood descends

The blood drips out of me
I know this feeling is meant to be

For all the times I cried so much
I though I had finally lost my touch

Me and this knife go together
We will be together forever

No one can make this feeling go away
I know it has come back to stay

As my mood will descend
My life has come to an end [comments] => 3 [counter] => 299 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Cici [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Pain

Contributed by Cici on Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 08:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

The blade touches my skin
Feels like a sharp pin

My heart is racing
My mind is chasing

Blood is pumping
My head is thumping

Pain, there is no feeling
Pain, this is healing

I'm setting my sorrows free
And I will guarantee

The pain inside will never end
Slowly as my mood descends

The blood drips out of me
I know this feeling is meant to be

For all the times I cried so much
I though I had finally lost my touch

Me and this knife go together
We will be together forever

No one can make this feeling go away
I know it has come back to stay

As my mood will descend
My life has come to an end

Copyright © Cici ... [ 2003-01-08 08:40:00]
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Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 11:16:00 AM AEST
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I am sooo glad you did not do this to yourself...it's a very dark place to be, you keep writing girl ...throw yourself into somthing you love doing instead of basking on what this person has done to you....do things you enjoy doing, like writing poetry, or painting? Do you like to paint? Perhaps draw?...don't allow people to win control of you...this is a very sad poem but im smiling simply because you didn't act on this....thank you my friend you are truly special inside dont let anyone else ever tell you differently...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 11:44:04 AM AEST
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I'm glad u didn't cut as well. I liked this poem I can relate to your feelings you put in this poem. This poem is so sad and true.
'Pain, this is healing' I dunno why but I loved that line. Great poem keep 'em coming!

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by azzouz on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 11:17:45 AM AEST
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i must tell u ....i was really shocked when i read ur poem...i had the same ideas...too bad...i let them out in other words...
beautifull mind....:)
thanx for sharing this poem...:)

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