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Array ( [sid] => 99742 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Deceitful You [time] => 2005-06-30 19:58:26 [hometext] => life has a funny way of catching up with people and eventually this person got a dose of his own medicine! [bodytext] => ~xXx~

Alone, Waiting, Wondering

will he come home tonight?

Anxious, Unsure, Pondering

what secret is held by the light

of the day. Sun comes and goes

the feeling inside it just grows

and it grows. Angry, Hurt, Reposed

I sit and I try and compose

myself at the table alone I wait,

the pit of my stomach, it aches

so bad. Trusting you a mistake?

One I hope I'm not likely to make

again. Sad, Lonely, Confused

off to bed, where your place is unused

once more. Empty, Abandoned, Bemused

my heart feeling battered and bruised

and then, Awoken! to the sound of a door

quiet footsteps heard crossing the floor,

to the shower you sneak off, once more

to cleanse scents of the woman before

me. Jealous, Hurt, Betrayed

our future together unmade

by your deceitful little charade

What a price for your sins I have paid!"
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 281 [topic] => 75 [informant] => CarolinaBlue [notes] => (Changes made as requested. Mod_11) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Deceitful You

Contributed by CarolinaBlue on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 07:58:26 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

~xXx~

Alone, Waiting, Wondering

will he come home tonight?

Anxious, Unsure, Pondering

what secret is held by the light

of the day. Sun comes and goes

the feeling inside it just grows

and it grows. Angry, Hurt, Reposed

I sit and I try and compose

myself at the table alone I wait,

the pit of my stomach, it aches

so bad. Trusting you a mistake?

One I hope I'm not likely to make

again. Sad, Lonely, Confused

off to bed, where your place is unused

once more. Empty, Abandoned, Bemused

my heart feeling battered and bruised

and then, Awoken! to the sound of a door

quiet footsteps heard crossing the floor,

to the shower you sneak off, once more

to cleanse scents of the woman before

me. Jealous, Hurt, Betrayed

our future together unmade

by your deceitful little charade

What a price for your sins I have paid!"

Copyright © CarolinaBlue ... [ 2005-06-30 19:58:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Deceitful You (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 10:13:15 PM AEST
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I have been where you are now..
and the only thing I can say to you is..
leave now-

If not, you will look back on this time..
(when you are happy again)
and scold yourself for not leaving sooner..
(lest you enjoy being treated as such..)

great write my friend..

B

Re: Deceitful You (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 11:55:43 AM AEST
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Sorry 4 your pain, the poem is well written but the subject is heartbreaking, hold on 2 your heart 4 in time it become your friend again, wish u well . . .

Ben

Re: Deceitful You (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 10:49:03 AM AEST
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Unrequited love is a terrible thing but two timing is the lowest form of betryal. Tell him to go to his other women and look for someone you can trust. There are many honest men around one only has to look.He might not be so handsome but his character will give you the love you so miss. Keep smiling from bernard

Re: Deceitful You (User Rating: 1 )
by priss on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 02:33:42 AM AEST
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almost painful to read, probably because i can relate. sad, but an absolutely wonderful poem.

Re: Deceitful You (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 12:50:46 PM AEST
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Very glad to read your author's note...Nice job with this, and I'm happy to know you've moved on...

Scorp.

Re: Deceitful You (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 11:20:18 AM AEST
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Very good. The style of thsi poem is very unusual, I really enjoyed it. I am sorry this happened to you. Hey, I'ven been there it was one of the most horrible times in my life. Great write and great style. Keep it up!

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