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Array ( [sid] => 99741 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => January 11, 2005 [time] => 2005-06-30 19:48:33 [hometext] => This poem was written after my best friend commited suicide on that date. I will forever remember that date as the day that I died. [bodytext] => January 11, 2005
a date that now brings tears to my eyes
thats the date my whole world died
the date that my friend took his life
without him, I am going out of my mind
we had some problems, he and I
we had not spoken for a while
and I regret that, oh, so much
never again will I feel his touch
never again can I call to say Hi
thinking about it brings tears to my eyes
cause Jojo was so special to me
I will never forget his memory
I will keep him forever by my side
my love for him, I will never hide
I will always miss the things we did
falling asleep right next to him
hearing him breathe so deeply in
talking all night about everything
we would talk about nothing at all
if he was not with me, I made sure I called
staying up all night together
these things will be in my heart forever
his action hurt my heart so deep
I cant do anything, other than weep
so many questions run through my mind
the one main question, tho, is Why?
I wish he knew what he thought of that day
what made him think it was The Only Way
why did he think he could not go on?
will I ever accept the fact that hes gone?
I still want to open my eyes and see
that it was a dream & Jojo is here with me
but I know it is just a hope from my heart
cause till its MY time, we will be apart
so, now all I do is think of our time
all our memories I keep locked in my mind
I will keep him with me until the end
he will be in my heart till we meet again!
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January 11, 2005

Contributed by GreenEyez on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 07:48:33 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



January 11, 2005
a date that now brings tears to my eyes
thats the date my whole world died
the date that my friend took his life
without him, I am going out of my mind
we had some problems, he and I
we had not spoken for a while
and I regret that, oh, so much
never again will I feel his touch
never again can I call to say Hi
thinking about it brings tears to my eyes
cause Jojo was so special to me
I will never forget his memory
I will keep him forever by my side
my love for him, I will never hide
I will always miss the things we did
falling asleep right next to him
hearing him breathe so deeply in
talking all night about everything
we would talk about nothing at all
if he was not with me, I made sure I called
staying up all night together
these things will be in my heart forever
his action hurt my heart so deep
I cant do anything, other than weep
so many questions run through my mind
the one main question, tho, is Why?
I wish he knew what he thought of that day
what made him think it was The Only Way
why did he think he could not go on?
will I ever accept the fact that hes gone?
I still want to open my eyes and see
that it was a dream & Jojo is here with me
but I know it is just a hope from my heart
cause till its MY time, we will be apart
so, now all I do is think of our time
all our memories I keep locked in my mind
I will keep him with me until the end
he will be in my heart till we meet again!




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Re: January 11, 2005 (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 08:58:56 PM AEST
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I am so very sorry for your loss and his other friends and family. It is so hard on those left that cared. Blessings to you all.

Rita


Re: January 11, 2005 (User Rating: 1 )
by BrainStorm on Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 01:53:28 AM AEST
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Please take this in stride. He have to live your'e life to the fullest. Belive me the only thing you can do now is honor him by being strong.




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