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The new day begins
Softly echoing
Past sins

Instead of hopeful
Filled with what ifs
What did I do?
What caused the rifts?

Torn and tattered
No answers coming forth
Left to doubt again
My self worth

Instead of growing
Am slowly dying within
What did I do?
What was my sin?

Torn and tattered
Again here we go
Back to the lows
I so well know

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Torn and Tattered

Contributed by NoSaint on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 09:01:49 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Torn and tattered
The new day begins
Softly echoing
Past sins

Instead of hopeful
Filled with what ifs
What did I do?
What caused the rifts?

Torn and tattered
No answers coming forth
Left to doubt again
My self worth

Instead of growing
Am slowly dying within
What did I do?
What was my sin?

Torn and tattered
Again here we go
Back to the lows
I so well know

Copyright © NoSaint ... [ 2005-06-30 09:01:49]
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Re: Torn and Tattered (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 02:06:37 PM AEST
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you my friend did nothing wrong. Dont for a moment doubt yourself these troubles were the rest involved. As far as the silence goes well I dont know whats going on anymore than you Im being ignored as well

Hugs
Michelle

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Re: Torn and Tattered (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 09:07:47 PM AEST
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Beautiful write but such a sad thought..

If ever ya need a shoulder..I'm here..

B

Re: Torn and Tattered (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 07:04:25 AM AEST
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No my dear friend you should not give in to such depression..you are a wise and warm hearted lady..O.k Shari, this is well written and heart touching..((hugs))
sincerely ..venkat

Re: Torn and Tattered (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 04:09:28 PM AEST
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Hang tough there, my friend...I'm sure it's their loss...... and they will soon realise it..
Jenni

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