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Array ( [sid] => 99685 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => tommarows just another day [time] => 2005-06-30 06:54:26 [hometext] => PLZ LEAVE COMMENTS! [bodytext] => Sometimes I get lost,
And I can't find my way back
back to where I am,
or where I need to be.

There were times when I felt alone,
so alone.
I never had a hand to hold,
or something to hold on to.

The past is lost ,
and will never return
but the future is clear,
and the present is right now.

This pain is just sorrow
this pain is just hurt,
I just need someone to hold

I feel so confused ,
lost in my emotions
Nothings coming back
Still tommarows just another day. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 48 [informant] => naughtygurl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

tommarows just another day

Contributed by naughtygurl on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 06:54:26 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Sometimes I get lost,
And I can't find my way back
back to where I am,
or where I need to be.

There were times when I felt alone,
so alone.
I never had a hand to hold,
or something to hold on to.

The past is lost ,
and will never return
but the future is clear,
and the present is right now.

This pain is just sorrow
this pain is just hurt,
I just need someone to hold

I feel so confused ,
lost in my emotions
Nothings coming back
Still tommarows just another day.

Copyright © naughtygurl ... [ 2005-06-30 06:54:26]
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Re: tommarows just another day (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 10:27:16 AM AEST
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much suffering in the body of the write...but, it ends with a happy truth. that, tomorrow is another day and live it good.
keep up the fine writing and thanks for sharing

dw

Re: tommarows just another day (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 06:08:04 PM AEST
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i read this piece about 5 times - i trhink its really good and you should be pleased with the way its turned out ed the opening stanza 'Sometimes I get lost,
And I can't find my way back
back to where I am,
or where I need to be.' i thought this really draws the reader in to finding out more... well done!

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