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Array ( [sid] => 99678 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => tomorrow you'll choke me [time] => 2005-06-30 02:28:19 [hometext] => ~you're self assured, a nightmare, i sleep with you enemy o adversary i keep you to keep what i cannot change, everyday looks the same.~ [bodytext] => the stillness of your breathing
the ease in your thoughts
the way you rest beside me
without and unknowing of loss

i have let you go
many times
ripped you from my chest
held my arm next to the crackle
the burn the sear
the stiffled test

your worth is more than a body
an occupant in my bed
you're existance is more invaluable
than the useless thoughts in my head

i hate the picture i have on my door
your face smiling down on me
i hate the hand you use to touch
i detest the key that you use out of trust

i'm changing for you
sacraficing before you
the person that i could be

every night i wake to the breath
the subtle exaustion
the inevitable death
and i don't fight the rush

the panic

i love you

you believe me

i'm empty

yesterday i told you
the intricate details of love

i'll never trust enough

yet you believe me
when i casually stutter denial
my beliefs my opinions
denied for you
you're vane and worthless

i'll see you tomorrow [comments] => 5 [counter] => 261 [topic] => 25 [informant] => weepingprophet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
tomorrow you'll choke me

Contributed by weepingprophet on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 02:28:19 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



the stillness of your breathing
the ease in your thoughts
the way you rest beside me
without and unknowing of loss

i have let you go
many times
ripped you from my chest
held my arm next to the crackle
the burn the sear
the stiffled test

your worth is more than a body
an occupant in my bed
you're existance is more invaluable
than the useless thoughts in my head

i hate the picture i have on my door
your face smiling down on me
i hate the hand you use to touch
i detest the key that you use out of trust

i'm changing for you
sacraficing before you
the person that i could be

every night i wake to the breath
the subtle exaustion
the inevitable death
and i don't fight the rush

the panic

i love you

you believe me

i'm empty

yesterday i told you
the intricate details of love

i'll never trust enough

yet you believe me
when i casually stutter denial
my beliefs my opinions
denied for you
you're vane and worthless

i'll see you tomorrow




Copyright © weepingprophet ... [ 2005-06-30 02:28:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: tomorrow you'll choke me (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 03:01:25 AM AEST
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awesome


Re: tomorrow you'll choke me (User Rating: 1 )
by Davinah on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 04:08:02 AM AEST
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very good...


Re: tomorrow you'll choke me (User Rating: 1 )
by Naughtygurl on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 07:03:45 AM AEST
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I love'd your poem. It makes sense which of coarse its supposed to but iono I just like your poem. Its a great write and I wouldnt mind reading more.

~~*Muffin*~~


Re: tomorrow you'll choke me (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 07:55:51 AM AEST
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wow..I liked this a lot..

very profound and idealistic-
very very well written
you really bare yourself in the last stanza and line..
you've spawned a new reader here in me-

B


Re: tomorrow you'll choke me (User Rating: 1 )
by Dri on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 12:58:09 PM AEST
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beauty and,again, that bone breaking honesty. i love this so much!!




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