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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Torn Apart
[time] => 2003-01-08 04:40:00
[hometext] => * I wrote this a while ago and thought i would post it. I dont like it as much as my new ones, but hopefully some of you will like it. So yeah hope u all enjoy it thanx to everyone who reads this and comments your comments mean a lot to me...*
[bodytext] => I'm here all torn apart
Standing in pieces of my heart Its like a jigsaw puzzle, But no one knows what its supposed to look like I keep my lighter burning So I won't die in this suffocating darkness My heart is blowing away By this bitter wind And I've almost given up Holding on to this one last piece Its my last lifeline all I survive on And you, you smile at my feeble attempts to survive Why do I strive for those few Moments of happiness When its surrounded by pain and frustration Life is so pointless Just 80 years of pain and s*** One setback always leads to another I feel like I've gone through hell and back God has left me to cry in the mud, But still, but still I CAN'T curse him and die My skin hangs loosely from my bones Oh, what a wretch am I And I'm here all torn apart Standing in pieces of my heart Can someone slip me some cyanide So I won't have to face the jury I'm like a broken doll and, The tears are forming, like precious jewels [comments] => 9 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 6 [informant] => bobotheclown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
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