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MY TURN
Contributed by
spazz911
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Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 09:58:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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oh my god, just knock it off
i know that it hurts
i've been there too
if you dont remember your bous
i watched them follow
arrange them in rows
so many i'd count them
then sit down and cry
i dealed with it too unno
its horrable pain
so don't feel like i've dismissed you
your thoughts that came true
and i feel bad for you
because i remember
but right now i want my turn
will you just let me through?
and you do admit that you stole him
and faded me out
sure you broke up
but the thought made me shout
many long nights
when i cried myself to sleep
and lied awake thinking
and wondered why i wasn't you
so will you just give me my chance
you'ved had yours, a few!
let me take my turn
dont turn me down too
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spazz911
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2005-06-29 21:58:59]
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Re: MY TURN
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by brokenwings on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 10:11:36 PM AEST
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