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Array ( [sid] => 99581 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Feel You (Dance of the Crescent Moon) [time] => 2005-06-29 11:28:38 [hometext] => this poem contains a little bit of erotica, so, be warned---but that's not the point of the poem...please read. [bodytext] => At the mid hour of night, when
My senses dull and my undulating
Thought atrophies into a
Dream, I lie
In my bed.
You come to me, and
Lie beside me, upon my bed.
I'm with you again.

Kisses spill into me like
Rain-- love boundless as the drops
Pour into me, I'm drowning
In it--- I breathe into you
And you into me
Our breath jives as one
Breath. One Life.
I close my eyes and plunge
Myself into your vast embrace.
As I begin to feel
Life ooze back into me again.
Slowly, sumptuously, like cream.
I taste you
Smother myself in you.
Luxurious and warm.
I feel
You I feel
The music of your heavy
Breath upon my neck.
I feel it...
Don't stop!
The pace of our heart quickens.
Lost in its rythm we dance
An erotic---
Dance of the night, the dance
Of the crescent moon.
And I feel
You.
I feel
Beyond the measure of infinity.
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I Feel You (Dance of the Crescent Moon)

Contributed by sweetdreamsaremadeofthis on Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 11:28:38 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

At the mid hour of night, when
My senses dull and my undulating
Thought atrophies into a
Dream, I lie
In my bed.
You come to me, and
Lie beside me, upon my bed.
I'm with you again.

Kisses spill into me like
Rain-- love boundless as the drops
Pour into me, I'm drowning
In it--- I breathe into you
And you into me
Our breath jives as one
Breath. One Life.
I close my eyes and plunge
Myself into your vast embrace.
As I begin to feel
Life ooze back into me again.
Slowly, sumptuously, like cream.
I taste you
Smother myself in you.
Luxurious and warm.
I feel
You I feel
The music of your heavy
Breath upon my neck.
I feel it...
Don't stop!
The pace of our heart quickens.
Lost in its rythm we dance
An erotic---
Dance of the night, the dance
Of the crescent moon.
And I feel
You.
I feel
Beyond the measure of infinity.

Copyright © sweetdreamsaremadeofthis ... [ 2005-06-29 11:28:38]
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Re: I Feel You (Dance of the Crescent Moon) (User Rating: 1 )
by she_smiles on Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 11:36:41 AM AEST
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I love a good poem that expresses pure, raw feeling as you did here. I really enjoyed this...I'm not sure I can even explain why other than what I already did. Well done, truly.

Re: I Feel You (Dance of the Crescent Moon) (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 11:49:15 AM AEST
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Sexy write, and tastefully done! I enjoyed this...you expressed yourself well.

Scorp.

Re: I Feel You (Dance of the Crescent Moon) (User Rating: 1 )
by KantKureLyfe on Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 12:20:41 PM AEST
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Very well captured. The physical expression of love written with such intensity and passion. I love the way it builds up, the way you compared and described it as a dance. Obviously the person whom you write about completes certain parts of you and makes you feel secure and love. This is the best poem ive read in a while. Well done!

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