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Array ( [sid] => 99537 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => POETRYGODSLOVE [time] => 2005-06-28 19:43:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => An open book upon the table,
In it's pages, that needs to be read,
Every word written there,
Some of it written in red.

I read a story about a little girl,
Her life was in strife,
She was the youngest of six,
The father beat his wife.

The young girl grew older,
One day she met someone special,
Taken so long to understand,
About love and laughter.

He took her hand and told her,
He would never leave her side.

He had spoken his word to her,
He showed a different life,
She grew up and was happy,
She became a wife.

She left him behind but not to far,
She became sad inside.
She then got down on bended knee,
He said He never left her side.

So then she talked about him,
Then she sung his songs,
She wanted to be just like him,
But things went wrong.

She spoke in a rough manner,
She didn't speak the right way,
She done things alot harder,
Then she went away.

A part of her is sadden,
She knows exactly why,
She don't how to speak her heart,
She only speaks her mind.

Her mind gets in the way,
It never was saved you know,
It wants to get a hold of her,
Never wants to let her go.

But I sandy,
POETRYGODSLOVE,
ONLY meant good you know.
Cause really deep in me
is only love.
deep in my heart and soul...

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POETRYGODSLOVE

Contributed by nhisname2005 on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 07:43:50 PM in AEST
Topic: poets

An open book upon the table,
In it's pages, that needs to be read,
Every word written there,
Some of it written in red.

I read a story about a little girl,
Her life was in strife,
She was the youngest of six,
The father beat his wife.

The young girl grew older,
One day she met someone special,
Taken so long to understand,
About love and laughter.

He took her hand and told her,
He would never leave her side.

He had spoken his word to her,
He showed a different life,
She grew up and was happy,
She became a wife.

She left him behind but not to far,
She became sad inside.
She then got down on bended knee,
He said He never left her side.

So then she talked about him,
Then she sung his songs,
She wanted to be just like him,
But things went wrong.

She spoke in a rough manner,
She didn't speak the right way,
She done things alot harder,
Then she went away.

A part of her is sadden,
She knows exactly why,
She don't how to speak her heart,
She only speaks her mind.

Her mind gets in the way,
It never was saved you know,
It wants to get a hold of her,
Never wants to let her go.

But I sandy,
POETRYGODSLOVE,
ONLY meant good you know.
Cause really deep in me
is only love.
deep in my heart and soul...

Copyright © nhisname2005 ... [ 2005-06-28 19:43:50]
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Re: POETRYGODSLOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 08:16:38 PM AEST
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Sandy, what you believe in your heart is right for you. We all have different beliefs and our beliefs are right for us. We do not have to all believe exactly the same way to reach for our creator. All we have to do is the very best we can in life following the rules handed down to us through our creators teachings. In my spiritual beliefs it is a simple as realizing and being thankful for what our creator gave us. Taking care of the people who mean much to us and taking care of our universal duties to the rest of the world. Honoring the elderly, teaching the children of the elders ways and living life with honesty, morals and the creed of my people. Giving back to others what my creator gave to me. Your beliefs are different, but remember that in your bible your saviour had disciples to go out and teach the word of your God. That is what your ministers and preachers do. But only if the people come to them. Same as the disciples. They spread the word of their coming to speak and the people came to them. Let the people come to you then if they ask spread the work of your saviour. Blessings, Rita

Re: POETRYGODSLOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 09:36:35 PM AEST
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Sandy,

good to see you posting again. I agree with Rita we are all different in the way we believe but there are some things on the site that always cause troubles one of which is religion, another politics just a couple.... Its better to live in harmony so we can all believe how we want but we need to be mindful of how others feel as well that way we wont have troubles
Hugs
Michelle

Re: POETRYGODSLOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 06:48:51 AM AEST
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Welcom back Sandy
I missed your poems
Looking forward to reading more!!!!
Cheers my friend
Coni

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