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clouds of rain
as i sail the pristine blue
to my dreamy southern planes
theres a greeting place
where old gives way to new
and all through my way
ill be signalling lights to you

as time gently rustles through the sail
my wine gives my silence, a song to sing as well

and your eyes bring ache to my mind
as the night holds time still
an old starlight finds my eyes..... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 21 [informant] => feathercut [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Wishing Water

Contributed by feathercut on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 04:11:57 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

my love she writes in
clouds of rain
as i sail the pristine blue
to my dreamy southern planes
theres a greeting place
where old gives way to new
and all through my way
ill be signalling lights to you

as time gently rustles through the sail
my wine gives my silence, a song to sing as well

and your eyes bring ache to my mind
as the night holds time still
an old starlight finds my eyes.....

Copyright © feathercut ... [ 2005-06-28 16:11:57]
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Re: Wishing Water (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 12:55:18 PM AEST
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Wow... you can really describe things well. You can write about an image great. Something I lack... I think it is hard to do. Nice write...
Jodi

Re: Wishing Water (User Rating: 1 )
by Strawberry on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 09:14:12 AM AEST
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very very very very good job. beautifully written.keep it up. sammi jo

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