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Array ( [sid] => 99498 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When i needed you most [time] => 2005-06-28 14:48:21 [hometext] => this poem is for my girlfriend, who was always there for me no matter what happend. I LOVE HER!!! [bodytext] => I remember that dark night,
Gun in a hand, wanting to make things right.
One bullet left,
Which would pierce though my head.
I held the gun up high,
Trying to remember just one one good time.
I look for a reason to keep living this horrible life.
You were always there to help me think,
To help me remember that the reason was me.
But where are you now?
Where are you when I need you the most?
You said were you would always be here,
But you're gone, so now i fear,
For my life.
As the darkness surrounds me and holds me tight,
I remember that one night,
When you wispered to me that you loved me,
And that you allways will.
You said that I will be in your heat,
And that for me you will kill.
You told me that you were more than just my friend.
You said you were my mine,
And you wouldn't be happy, unless I was alive.
So now I lower the gun full of hate and rage,
And run to you arms where I fell safe. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 55 [informant] => forsaken_soul33 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

When i needed you most

Contributed by forsaken_soul33 on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 02:48:21 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

I remember that dark night,
Gun in a hand, wanting to make things right.
One bullet left,
Which would pierce though my head.
I held the gun up high,
Trying to remember just one one good time.
I look for a reason to keep living this horrible life.
You were always there to help me think,
To help me remember that the reason was me.
But where are you now?
Where are you when I need you the most?
You said were you would always be here,
But you're gone, so now i fear,
For my life.
As the darkness surrounds me and holds me tight,
I remember that one night,
When you wispered to me that you loved me,
And that you allways will.
You said that I will be in your heat,
And that for me you will kill.
You told me that you were more than just my friend.
You said you were my mine,
And you wouldn't be happy, unless I was alive.
So now I lower the gun full of hate and rage,
And run to you arms where I fell safe.

Copyright © forsaken_soul33 ... [ 2005-06-28 14:48:21]
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Re: When i needed you most (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 12:10:02 PM AEST
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This is scary. My friend is suicidal and she has threatened that if I were to leave she would have no purpose in life and kill herself. If this is how you feel, do not let someone else decide your life. Don't let them control what you do. It is your life and you need to take control... don't let another person decide your last move. Always have the last word in... always... nice write...
Jodi

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