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Array ( [sid] => 99494 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => +Untitled Song+ [time] => 2005-06-28 14:14:13 [hometext] => [bodytext] => we would talk for hours
about useless things
like about when we would be famous
and things we would achieve
what our goals in life were
the deepest secrets of our hearts
where to end at and where to start

do you have this feeling
this knawing at your heart
taking from your life
when your alone in the dark
can you see me there
waiting just for you
so i can see you
before you say a word
and remember times o-so-long ago
where you would hold my hand
and tell me its okay
that everything would be better
another day

but now the warmth is gone
along with your smile
your words to comfort
your hand to hold
the conversations we used to have
the love in my heart i was sure we had

do you have this feeling
this knawing at your heart
taking from your life
when your alone in the dark
can you see me there
waiting just for you
so i can see you
before you say a word
and remember times o-so-long ago
where you would hold my hand
and tell me its okay
that everything would be better
another day

and now im not sure just where to start
what was that feeling i had in my heart
was it love, or was it just a game
was it something i would never gain
was it a longing i would never soothe
a pain long gone when i was with you


do you have this feeling
this knawing at your heart
taking from your life
when your alone in the dark
can you see me there
waiting just for you
so i can see you
before you say a word
and remember times o-so-long ago
where you would hold my hand
and tell me its okay
that everything would be better
another day

but now i fear that day is gone
it was over long ago
when i was better
when i had you to hold me in your arms

everything will be better another day
everything will be better another day
everything will be better another day
everything will be better another day
everything will be better the day im with you



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+Untitled Song+

Contributed by apocalypseXkissX on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 02:14:13 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



we would talk for hours
about useless things
like about when we would be famous
and things we would achieve
what our goals in life were
the deepest secrets of our hearts
where to end at and where to start

do you have this feeling
this knawing at your heart
taking from your life
when your alone in the dark
can you see me there
waiting just for you
so i can see you
before you say a word
and remember times o-so-long ago
where you would hold my hand
and tell me its okay
that everything would be better
another day

but now the warmth is gone
along with your smile
your words to comfort
your hand to hold
the conversations we used to have
the love in my heart i was sure we had

do you have this feeling
this knawing at your heart
taking from your life
when your alone in the dark
can you see me there
waiting just for you
so i can see you
before you say a word
and remember times o-so-long ago
where you would hold my hand
and tell me its okay
that everything would be better
another day

and now im not sure just where to start
what was that feeling i had in my heart
was it love, or was it just a game
was it something i would never gain
was it a longing i would never soothe
a pain long gone when i was with you


do you have this feeling
this knawing at your heart
taking from your life
when your alone in the dark
can you see me there
waiting just for you
so i can see you
before you say a word
and remember times o-so-long ago
where you would hold my hand
and tell me its okay
that everything would be better
another day

but now i fear that day is gone
it was over long ago
when i was better
when i had you to hold me in your arms

everything will be better another day
everything will be better another day
everything will be better another day
everything will be better another day
everything will be better the day im with you







Copyright © apocalypseXkissX ... [ 2005-06-28 14:14:13]
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Re: +Untitled Song+ (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:57:43 AM AEST
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Wow... a long song. This is like 6 minutes, huh? Anyways, it is really good. Nice write (find a title... more will read it. Maybe call it, 'The Day I Am With You')...
Jodi


Re: +Untitled Song+ (User Rating: 1 )
by Strawberry on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 09:29:38 AM AEST
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very well written. beautiful.

it always hurts to lose someone. if you do lose them, then you know he/she wasnt the one for you.

keep up the nice work.

sammi jo




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