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Sex appeal.
Evil snatching up your soul.

Drugs, booze.
Caught in a downward spiral.
As the blood begins to ooze.

The beating bass
Your pumping heart
See the terror in your face

You run this race
Lusty games
As seduction picks up the pace

Staggering down the walk
Labored breathing
It’s prey, it seems to stalk.

Slashing, ripping, biting.
The bliss of life slips away
And it all seems so exciting,

Left to die alone
In excruciating pain
And your cold to the bone.

The sun begins to rise
The world wakes
To the sound of your cries

Deep in this pit it waits
As the hunger begins to rise
And soon hell will open up its gates
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Evil

Contributed by GurlyTye on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 01:48:40 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Sex, drums, rock and roll.
Sex appeal.
Evil snatching up your soul.

Drugs, booze.
Caught in a downward spiral.
As the blood begins to ooze.

The beating bass
Your pumping heart
See the terror in your face

You run this race
Lusty games
As seduction picks up the pace

Staggering down the walk
Labored breathing
It’s prey, it seems to stalk.

Slashing, ripping, biting.
The bliss of life slips away
And it all seems so exciting,

Left to die alone
In excruciating pain
And your cold to the bone.

The sun begins to rise
The world wakes
To the sound of your cries

Deep in this pit it waits
As the hunger begins to rise
And soon hell will open up its gates

Copyright © GurlyTye ... [ 2005-06-28 13:48:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Evil (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 01:58:55 PM AEST
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briliiant dark writing, flowed well,

pix xx

Re: Evil (User Rating: 1 )
by gwenevere on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 02:07:24 PM AEST
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very dark, very descriptive,very good.,/ros

Re: Evil (User Rating: 1 )
by ROCKSTAR on Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 09:12:00 PM AEST
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its pretty great...i like it alot

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