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Array ( [sid] => 99484 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Missing [time] => 2005-06-28 12:53:33 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Secrets and lies
What a strange day
How a child crying
With blonde hair
Affects me so
What forgotten secret
Memory hides in me

What about me don't i know
It feels like i've spent my
Whole life in my bed

I've just dreamt this life
Somehow with all the lies
I've forgotten the enchanted
Childhood i've seemed to have lived

Such a happy child
But all i remember is the crying
Of the missing of my parents love
Missing of what was once called home
But now i just feel so lost

I want to hug my parents
And tell them i love them
But i've lost the way
I've got lost in the way

I miss the sun and grass
Above and below me
Running around and laughing
Rosy cheeks so bright
And how my eyes shone

Now locked in darkness
Forgotten and neglected
I ask what is the point oF
My life
No answer yet [comments] => 2 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 25 [informant] => harlot20 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Missing

Contributed by harlot20 on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 12:53:33 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Secrets and lies
What a strange day
How a child crying
With blonde hair
Affects me so
What forgotten secret
Memory hides in me

What about me don't i know
It feels like i've spent my
Whole life in my bed

I've just dreamt this life
Somehow with all the lies
I've forgotten the enchanted
Childhood i've seemed to have lived

Such a happy child
But all i remember is the crying
Of the missing of my parents love
Missing of what was once called home
But now i just feel so lost

I want to hug my parents
And tell them i love them
But i've lost the way
I've got lost in the way

I miss the sun and grass
Above and below me
Running around and laughing
Rosy cheeks so bright
And how my eyes shone

Now locked in darkness
Forgotten and neglected
I ask what is the point oF
My life
No answer yet

Copyright © harlot20 ... [ 2005-06-28 12:53:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Missing (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 01:14:58 PM AEST
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Well..find the inner to make it all. You can do that, we all the chance and self to do. I did like the way you presented your lock out........well get the key and open. I know, probably harder, than what i may think..........but be happy and all around will become happy.:)

Brew~

Re: Missing (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 01:52:02 PM AEST
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i felt pretty much like this today.
... but i just came off the phone... i was speaking to a friend who cares and wants to help pull me out...
she's made me feel warmer and more positive...
she said to just keep on going, because, even though i may not think so... i'll touch more lives than i can imagine...!
... and i'm sure it's the same with you.
if you give your-self a chance to shine then you'll get through it, but if you put your-self down and dwell on the past, then you'll never get better...

may peace be with you.

from rosie.

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