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[title] => My calming fanstasy,......
[time] => 2005-06-28 11:40:56
[hometext] => just floating on dreams..................
[bodytext] => One day, when the skies and wind were calm..........I took the time, to walk the white sands
Walking so slowly, taking in everything, that the ocean offers. The air so soft.....gently brushing the hair from my face.....the sprinkles of tiny grains of sand, and the mist of the oceans spray. I sit..........and gently lay back, and close the eyes. Feel, and release all. After a semi- calmeness................I deam of a beautiful .....fantasy.
I get up; I turn to see a beach house with open windows and a luring trance.
I begin my journey, and then I am there. There to a place that could take me beyond all...........but then I must know , its dreams.
So I walk up, and open the door. I walk the stairs, I see a shadow................but not sure what it is.
Then the rain begins................The air becomes cooler. I am now feeling a ora..............a calm ora around me and the place I am in.
Candles lit; music playing; and the wine is poured.
I am lured to the balcony...........something keeps bringing closer to the dark but dimmed lit area. I stop, and then turn, as I feel a presence near me.
I pick up the glass of wine, bring to my lips.............and then I feel a warm breeze.............as one has walked behind me.
I walk to the balcony, stand and watch the rain come down, and the lightening crosses, the darkened sky. I know I am not alone. Am i scared? No, because the presense, that is with me..............is calm.
Finally, its known.........the one who is there is someone who makes me want, and need. I feel the arms wrap around, my waist........the warm breath, and then soft whisper........I hear hello: I see you have found, all that is brought for you, and my self.
The fantasy has become real.....................but then; a spray of the oceans mist......hits my face , and I am awake. Still with a calmness.....could of it been real? Or just a Fanstasy?!
Brew~
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My calming fanstasy,......
Contributed by
brew
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Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 11:40:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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One day, when the skies and wind were calm..........I took the time, to walk the white sands
Walking so slowly, taking in everything, that the ocean offers. The air so soft.....gently brushing the hair from my face.....the sprinkles of tiny grains of sand, and the mist of the oceans spray. I sit..........and gently lay back, and close the eyes. Feel, and release all. After a semi- calmeness................I deam of a beautiful .....fantasy.
I get up; I turn to see a beach house with open windows and a luring trance.
I begin my journey, and then I am there. There to a place that could take me beyond all...........but then I must know , its dreams.
So I walk up, and open the door. I walk the stairs, I see a shadow................but not sure what it is.
Then the rain begins................The air becomes cooler. I am now feeling a ora..............a calm ora around me and the place I am in.
Candles lit; music playing; and the wine is poured.
I am lured to the balcony...........something keeps bringing closer to the dark but dimmed lit area. I stop, and then turn, as I feel a presence near me.
I pick up the glass of wine, bring to my lips.............and then I feel a warm breeze.............as one has walked behind me.
I walk to the balcony, stand and watch the rain come down, and the lightening crosses, the darkened sky. I know I am not alone. Am i scared? No, because the presense, that is with me..............is calm.
Finally, its known.........the one who is there is someone who makes me want, and need. I feel the arms wrap around, my waist........the warm breath, and then soft whisper........I hear hello: I see you have found, all that is brought for you, and my self.
The fantasy has become real.....................but then; a spray of the oceans mist......hits my face , and I am awake. Still with a calmness.....could of it been real? Or just a Fanstasy?!
Brew~
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Re: My calming fanstasy,......
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by justme03 on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 03:45:53 PM AEST
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this is beautiful and made me feel really calm and tingly inside. good poetry can do that. Bravo!
awesome write! i shall read it again!!!!
luv, ~Kortnie~
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Re: My calming fanstasy,......
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 06:48:57 PM AEST
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A beautidul excursion into the realm of faraway places that we could all use now and then, lovely peice of writting . . .
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Re: My calming fanstasy,......
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 09:44:36 PM AEST
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wow...
what an original idea-
to be courted by an emotion..
and "calm" no less
spectacular write brew..
5 stars from me on this..
B |
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Re: My calming fanstasy,......
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 09:47:22 PM AEST
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what an awesome tale! i really love this one.
great imagery and great flow.
i could have read it for hours had it continued...great job brew!!!
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Re: My calming fanstasy,......
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 05:06:49 AM AEST
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| Brew I thought that those fantasies were mine alone. As one gets older the Fantasies get more vivid. Keep on dreaming my friend sometimes dreams do come true.all the best from bernard. |
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Re: My calming fanstasy,......
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 05:58:19 AM AEST
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good job man its way better then bernards
trash lol If this your first write like this awsome keep it up and even if its not keep it up anyway how about that |
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Re: My calming fanstasy,......
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by Kano on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 09:43:18 PM AEST
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| That was just perfectly blissful and mysterious, I found myself being pulled into the poem and could see everything that you were describing and it was very calming. Fantastic, great job brew I love it. I needed that, thank you for telling me to read it. |
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Re: My calming fanstasy,......
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by Darkhorse71 on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:37:14 PM AEST
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Brew, Thank you for writing this. I have read it several times and will several more. You drew me in and held me to the end and left me with a sense of longing - for more.
Awesome, Incredible poem.
calming hugs m'lady, john |
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Re: My calming fanstasy,......
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 09:06:32 PM AEST
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i feel kinda warm and tingley great write with a lot of passion
R.M.wilder |
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Re: My calming fanstasy,......
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 11:48:41 AM AEST
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| YOU STOLE MY BREATH FOR I CANNOT BREATH YOU HAVE TAKEN MY HEART IT'S YOURS TO HAVE YOU HAVE BECOME ONE WITH MY SOUL AS WE NOW ARE INSEPERABLE |
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Re: My calming fanstasy,......
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 12th December 2007 @ 01:25:53 PM AEST
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It seems more like a story than a poem in structure, but it carries a poem's presence. It's... soft, gentle, slowly moving its way into your head, until the picture's painted.
Take care, and I liked it.
David |
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