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[aid] => mick
[title] => what becomes of ......
[time] => 2005-06-28 09:03:35
[hometext] => about a relationship that went dead and fizzled out (puppy love) i would appretiate some sort of feedback also please take a look at my other stuff and leave comments negative or positive
[bodytext] => Our love has drowned in sadness I regret to inform you it was`nt painless i loved you so much i reached out but you never touched the connection i lusted to gain to take away my world of pain A lesson in life has been learnt my only wish is i did`nt get my fingers burnt the hours i spent trying to make things right the times i cried through the long cold night You were my lattern threw the dark You know you left your mark you stained it in all over my skin my reflection no longer looks the same i am a man now not just a name for all love you had was`nt real and i ended up with the raw deal we were caught up in things jumped in too soon and confused our feelings I am on the beach now i have my head clear and for the lessons you taught me i say now "thank you, my dear!" [comments] => 1 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 43 [informant] => budge [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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