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Array ( [sid] => 99469 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untitled [time] => 2005-06-28 08:40:59 [hometext] => This is a song I wrote out of pure frustration towards people who are bullies, and hopefully it will be put to use in my band. [bodytext] => Verse:
Hatred Growing,
Anger Flowing!
Thoughts of destruction and violence construe my reality.
Memories of all those,
Who have in the past,
Destroyed what little faith I had in myself.

Chorus:

Always looking to pick fun,
Never realizing the consequences of what you’ve done!
Take a look around,
Can’t you see what is happening...

Verse:

Reality sets in,
The final realization and concentration
Upon the fact I am better than you.
Reminding myself not to sink to the level that,
Those people seem to remain at.

Chorus

Verse:

I sit and watch it all fade away,
The anger, the confusion,
The complete and utter frustration.
Of knowing I could not do anything,
To prevent the nonsense from occurring

Chorus

Solo

Verse:

All my life thinking that I deserved all of that,
Then with a sudden epiphany.
I now understand that I am in fact better than you.
I do not need to ruin hopes and dreams,
For my own fun and games!
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 13 [informant] => bass_player16 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Untitled

Contributed by bass_player16 on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 08:40:59 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Verse:
Hatred Growing,
Anger Flowing!
Thoughts of destruction and violence construe my reality.
Memories of all those,
Who have in the past,
Destroyed what little faith I had in myself.

Chorus:

Always looking to pick fun,
Never realizing the consequences of what you’ve done!
Take a look around,
Can’t you see what is happening...

Verse:

Reality sets in,
The final realization and concentration
Upon the fact I am better than you.
Reminding myself not to sink to the level that,
Those people seem to remain at.

Chorus

Verse:

I sit and watch it all fade away,
The anger, the confusion,
The complete and utter frustration.
Of knowing I could not do anything,
To prevent the nonsense from occurring

Chorus

Solo

Verse:

All my life thinking that I deserved all of that,
Then with a sudden epiphany.
I now understand that I am in fact better than you.
I do not need to ruin hopes and dreams,
For my own fun and games!

Copyright © bass_player16 ... [ 2005-06-28 08:40:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Taylor on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 08:58:52 AM AEST
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hey i like this poem keep up the good work!
nice user name!

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