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[title] => Out of Love
[time] => 2005-06-27 13:14:31
[hometext] => It is hard to fall out of love, you tend to close up so nobody will hurt you again, but it happens; because we still believe in hope,at least I did.Please comment afterwards.
[bodytext] => I use to be strong and fly like a dove.This pain is overwhelming, will someone show me how to fall out of love?
Moving on isn't as easy as one would say. When you dedicate your heart to someone, you end up going back their way.
Hoping to make a change, then you realize you can't. You start to feel helpless, kind of like a foot stepping on an ant.
You get a text on your cell, saying; "I HATE YOU," and it burns like hell, so you respond with; " I am sorry you do, and I wish you well."
I carried her picture because I knew I was going to miss her, she quit spending time with me, and all I wanted to do was to continue to kiss her.
Falling out of love isn't easy, but I'll make it on my own, history won't repeat itself, because never again will I consider a girls' heart my home.
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Out of Love
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THUGGIN4REAL
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Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 01:14:31 PM in AEST
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LostLove
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I use to be strong and fly like a dove.This pain is overwhelming, will someone show me how to fall out of love?
Moving on isn't as easy as one would say. When you dedicate your heart to someone, you end up going back their way.
Hoping to make a change, then you realize you can't. You start to feel helpless, kind of like a foot stepping on an ant.
You get a text on your cell, saying; "I HATE YOU," and it burns like hell, so you respond with; " I am sorry you do, and I wish you well."
I carried her picture because I knew I was going to miss her, she quit spending time with me, and all I wanted to do was to continue to kiss her.
Falling out of love isn't easy, but I'll make it on my own, history won't repeat itself, because never again will I consider a girls' heart my home.
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Re: Out of Love
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by moon_light on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 02:48:17 PM AEST
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she just wasent the one. you will fined someone when the time is right. you have the good memorys that will lead you to happyness. hold tight you seem like a good person and deserve a good partner to. good wright keep it up
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Re: Out of Love
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 10:13:34 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this piece, it is hard to fall out of love with someone whom you gave your all to, but you do it then you move on.Great piece thanks for sharing. |
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by vampirelover on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 10:38:41 AM AEST
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hey i love this its really good. and she just wasn't the one but the one is out there.
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Re: Out of Love
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 12:57:37 PM AEST
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| I really like this. I know the feeling all too well as of late. |
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Re: Out of Love
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by KishaLovesCare126 on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 08:22:01 PM AEST
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Hello!
Sorry I havn't been on much. I do want to say I can in some ways re-late to this poem. I'm a girl ya but, I know what u mean even if your not a girl. However I have to say a very well writen write very true.
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Re: Out of Love
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 10:43:00 PM AEST
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Thoughtful and well-chosen words, spoken with deep feeling. Alas, this life is so imperfect, that such things happen, but there is always much to learn. Learning doesn't come easy or without pain, but it gives us promise for a better future as we discover wisdom. Hang in there.
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Re: Out of Love
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 10:53:17 PM AEST
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Thoughtful and well-chosen words, spoken with deep feeling. Alas, this life is so imperfect, that such things happen, but there is always much to learn. Learning doesn't come easy or without pain, but it gives us promise for a better future as we discover wisdom. Hang in there.
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Re: Out of Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 12:33:09 PM AEST
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She wasnt your true love, and probably wasnt meant to be in your life, but dont give up on all females. You'll find the right one some day...and when you see your daughter, isnt her heart home? Nice way to express yourself. Keep it up.
-Courtney
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