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The moment that everything pauses for a good reason
You don’t care what you’re doing just as long as it feels perfect
You reach for what is right
For what you care most
Your lover!!
Not just your lover but best friend & sole mate
That person who will always care for you the way you want them to
You let go of what is holding you back
For what is holding you down
Watching those perfect eyes that are so sweet…so innocent
Looking at each other so close so deeply into each others eyes

You take a breath and you know what’s right
His yours & his only yours tonight
All you want is that perfect touch all over you
To listen to his voice
To hear what is right

It means so much that you don’t want this to end
The passionate kisses
The passionate love that keeps yous together

Never wanting it to end & to last for all eternity
You close your eyes & your glad there is not a single regret
You know if he ever leaves you that you will always miss him
Remembering your first
Remembering your first time so passionate so sweet
To hold each other so close in each other’s arms
To know what feels right & to have such deep feelings for each other.

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Loving

Contributed by mia on Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 03:21:51 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

It’s the moment that you let loose
The moment that everything pauses for a good reason
You don’t care what you’re doing just as long as it feels perfect
You reach for what is right
For what you care most
Your lover!!
Not just your lover but best friend & sole mate
That person who will always care for you the way you want them to
You let go of what is holding you back
For what is holding you down
Watching those perfect eyes that are so sweet…so innocent
Looking at each other so close so deeply into each others eyes

You take a breath and you know what’s right
His yours & his only yours tonight
All you want is that perfect touch all over you
To listen to his voice
To hear what is right

It means so much that you don’t want this to end
The passionate kisses
The passionate love that keeps yous together

Never wanting it to end & to last for all eternity
You close your eyes & your glad there is not a single regret
You know if he ever leaves you that you will always miss him
Remembering your first
Remembering your first time so passionate so sweet
To hold each other so close in each other’s arms
To know what feels right & to have such deep feelings for each other.

Copyright © mia ... [ 2005-06-27 03:21:51]
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Re: Loving (User Rating: 1 )
by ChrissyMarie on Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 03:58:06 AM AEST
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I loved your poem. It's very deep and sweet. Keep on writing your good at it.

Re: Loving (User Rating: 1 )
by budge on Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 06:22:56 AM AEST
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a subject you clearly connected with!

Re: Loving (User Rating: 1 )
by budge on Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 06:23:49 AM AEST
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a subject you clearly connected with!

Re: Loving (User Rating: 1 )
by R_G_Love on Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 06:48:51 AM AEST
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Nice job!!!

Re: Loving (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 11:03:53 AM AEST
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hmm,delicious.

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