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Array ( [sid] => 99389 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => With Great Fervor [time] => 2005-06-27 02:55:48 [hometext] => this is an extended version of my poem. i have not had much of a chance to write anything new so i wanted to post this [bodytext] => Dreaming of your face
Filling my heart
My inner space

Haunted and wanting to haunt
You when we are apart
To be with you is all I could ever want

You imbue my world and free my soul
With out your love and that of the majesty
With out you I would never be whole

We are lovers yet again
Kissing in romance like in a tragedy
Only in this play nothing is pretend

I wish I could stay inside
In you for always
Not just in your heart or by your side

Nothing can overwhelm me like you do
Nothing could ever lead me astray
Yours is the only love I need to be true

Thieves can never steel your glow
Your resonating light
It shines inside me too and I won’t ever let it go

With great fervor our hearts heal this cold universe
Like stars in the night time sky we shine bright
With you inside me all my darkness is dispersed

I am most vulnerable when it comes to you
You read between the lines and make it an art
You have seen the best and worst of me and you still do

Love me the way you do
With your whole soul mind body and heart
I will always love you through and through

That is why I am always dreaming of your face
Of the way your eyes make my world more sapphire
In my heart and soul and mind you will always a place



You are the undersetting for all I want to be
With you in my life I could always reach higher and higher
I could shape the stars and make new constellations just for you to see

This is how I will always feel about you
Always more and never less
Always dreaming of you

Not just at night when I'm alone
Wanting to sleep but unable rest
Without you here in my bed your loving home

Where I want to feel you heart
Beating with mine inside my chest
As one with yours unable to tell them a part

Without you in my life I would be torn and worn
My hear would be in a gilded cage
With out you in me my soul would be unborn

I love you like a man would love
In this world we make our stage
No longer a child with a fully grown love

If you left me all the angels would weep
My world would fall apart and I would want to die
For my love is only yours to forever keep
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Doriens_Picture [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
With Great Fervor

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 02:55:48 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Dreaming of your face
Filling my heart
My inner space

Haunted and wanting to haunt
You when we are apart
To be with you is all I could ever want

You imbue my world and free my soul
With out your love and that of the majesty
With out you I would never be whole

We are lovers yet again
Kissing in romance like in a tragedy
Only in this play nothing is pretend

I wish I could stay inside
In you for always
Not just in your heart or by your side

Nothing can overwhelm me like you do
Nothing could ever lead me astray
Yours is the only love I need to be true

Thieves can never steel your glow
Your resonating light
It shines inside me too and I won’t ever let it go

With great fervor our hearts heal this cold universe
Like stars in the night time sky we shine bright
With you inside me all my darkness is dispersed

I am most vulnerable when it comes to you
You read between the lines and make it an art
You have seen the best and worst of me and you still do

Love me the way you do
With your whole soul mind body and heart
I will always love you through and through

That is why I am always dreaming of your face
Of the way your eyes make my world more sapphire
In my heart and soul and mind you will always a place



You are the undersetting for all I want to be
With you in my life I could always reach higher and higher
I could shape the stars and make new constellations just for you to see

This is how I will always feel about you
Always more and never less
Always dreaming of you

Not just at night when I'm alone
Wanting to sleep but unable rest
Without you here in my bed your loving home

Where I want to feel you heart
Beating with mine inside my chest
As one with yours unable to tell them a part

Without you in my life I would be torn and worn
My hear would be in a gilded cage
With out you in me my soul would be unborn

I love you like a man would love
In this world we make our stage
No longer a child with a fully grown love

If you left me all the angels would weep
My world would fall apart and I would want to die
For my love is only yours to forever keep




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Re: With Great Fervor (User Rating: 1 )
by ChrissyMarie on Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 04:03:32 AM AEST
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very sweet and deep


Re: With Great Fervor (User Rating: 1 )
by R_G_Love on Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 06:51:59 AM AEST
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Very, very, Nice!!!


Re: With Great Fervor (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 08:26:26 AM AEST
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A lovely write very heartfelt nicely done . . .

Ben




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