 |
Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+ |
Custom Search
|
|
|
||||
| Welcome ! | Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link | 29-May 12:59:22 AEST | ||
|
|
||||
|
|
||||
|
|
||||
|
Array
(
[sid] => 99366
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => You never knew why (rewrite of you'll never know why)
[time] => 2005-06-26 15:32:09
[hometext] => I rewrote the first poem I ever posted on this site "You'll never know why" They were written at different times in my life and my writing career, so if anyone gets a chance plz check out both and tell me which you like more. Thanks
[bodytext] => I was drowning in memories, drowning for years pulled under by sobs that never reached your ears For salty water never left the corners of my eyes And not a sound escaped my lips til after our goodbyes I would have choked on my pain before I ever let you see but you of all people should have seen right through me the tears built up inside of me, tearing me apart And I wanted to tell you oh, so bad, until you broke my heart they say hindsight's twenty/twenty, and now I know it's true looking back I'm oh, so glad that I never told you You knew everything about me that I wanted you to know and you chose not to see the things I didn't outright show I'm not perfect, never was and I won't ever be I didn't ask for your pity or your sympathy All I wanted was your love but you never understood You didn't see me for me, I guess there was no way you could So the drowning continues, I'm still dying inside My secrets die with me, I'll never abide You already lost me and you never knew why but I'm killing myself with each tear I don't cry [comments] => 1 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 32 [informant] => unbreakable [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
|
Menu
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©
Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster
All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com
All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.
Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com