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Depression of a child,
A soul that aches to be wild.
Time to grow into a woman,
To find my place beside my man.

Two lost souls,
Stumbled together and became whole.
Next to my side is where you stand,
There to always hold my hand.

My depression was a test,
That you suceeded in best.
It nearly broke you,
You survived. This must be true.

You declared your love first,
My reaction was not rehearsed.
Shocked, yet i feel the same,
My soul is now so very tame.

SJ

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you suceed where may have failed

Contributed by little_genna on Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 05:51:32 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Depression of a child,
A soul that aches to be wild.
Time to grow into a woman,
To find my place beside my man.

Two lost souls,
Stumbled together and became whole.
Next to my side is where you stand,
There to always hold my hand.

My depression was a test,
That you suceeded in best.
It nearly broke you,
You survived. This must be true.

You declared your love first,
My reaction was not rehearsed.
Shocked, yet i feel the same,
My soul is now so very tame.

SJ

Copyright © little_genna ... [ 2005-06-26 05:51:32]
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Re: you suceed where may have failed (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 02:01:47 AM AEST
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what a gentle poem and yet well stated and

sincere, love at it's best lovely peice of

poetry . . .

Ben

Re: you suceed where may have failed (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 07:38:42 AM AEST
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heartfelt words..

"Two lost souls,
Stumbled together and became whole."

great visual there..
great write-

B

Re: you suceed where may have failed (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 04:29:16 AM AEST
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no its not poor....nothing is....very good write,

love,
Umang

Re: you suceed where may have failed (User Rating: 1 )
by MissUnderstood on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 01:11:52 AM AEST
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This sounds like a person that i know...great work!

Re: you suceed where may have failed (User Rating: 1 )
by MissUnderstood on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 01:11:56 AM AEST
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This sounds like a person that i know...great work!

Re: you suceed where may have failed (User Rating: 1 )
by gmcse8 on Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 12:42:45 PM AEST
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ok Tame Soul..........was reading this one and the one Are You Like The Rest. Seemed like companion pieces to me. Don't know if you intended that, but dates throw me off a little bit on that supposition. Read like companion pieces however, and when i look at them like that I like the Question/Answer feeling they evoke when I read them. One asks and the other answers, I like that, but again thrown off by posted dates, but don't really care I like reading them with Q and A in my mind, if I am totally wrong, be gentle. lol
bob

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