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Array ( [sid] => 993 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I want to... [time] => 2002-07-23 09:42:24 [hometext] => I suffer from depression and i write a lot of poems about it. I dont mean for my poetry to harm anyone in anyway, its just a way for me to get out my feelings. I urge anyone not to do anything that i write about. I have a mental illness with my brain and i have seeked help and i am getting sorted. But i am not urging anyone to do anything that i write about. [bodytext] => I love you all
W ith all my heart
A lone I stand
N o-one around
T he end is near
T oday’s the day
O ver the top I go
D own the drain I go
I want to die
E nd it now

I love you all
W ith all my heart
A nd together we stand
N ot one, but all
T ogether we’ll get through
T ill its all over
O ver and at the end
L ove is in my heart
I love you all
V ictory will be ours
E ventually we will win
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I want to...

Contributed by Van on Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 09:42:24 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I love you all
W ith all my heart
A lone I stand
N o-one around
T he end is near
T oday’s the day
O ver the top I go
D own the drain I go
I want to die
E nd it now

I love you all
W ith all my heart
A nd together we stand
N ot one, but all
T ogether we’ll get through
T ill its all over
O ver and at the end
L ove is in my heart
I love you all
V ictory will be ours
E ventually we will win

Copyright Â© Van ... [ 2002-07-23 09:42:24]
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Re: I want to... (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 12:14:21 PM AEST
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Well, that is ok. You already took the step towards healing by writing. :) I too write about my depression in a way, that my illness is something else. I have a medical problem that I have been batteling since Jan. of this year, and has increasinly gotten worse for me. I don't write in poem form about my problem, I just write it out as I feel my insecurity of not being well again, and praying that this doctor visit coming up will be the one to help me out, and find the problem, a cure, to end the pain. And sometimes, I write like I would like to end it all, sometimes, its a way to let out our emotions, maybe meaning it, maybe not. it just helps. so I may or may not have offended you by writing here, but your write is a good one, and glad you took your emotions to it.
Amber Rose :)

Re: I want to... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kassidi on Wednesday, 24th July 2002 @ 11:06:52 AM AEST
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Don't be ashamed by what you write. It is part of you. I learned that too. Great write.
Kassidi

Re: I want to... (User Rating: 1 )
by Van on Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 01:25:56 AM AEST
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No i didnt take any offence of what you wrote dont worry. Thank you for you compliments. Ive been suffering from depression since i was about 13, im 17 now. It kinda went away for a while but it recently came back with force when i broke up with my girlfriend of 3 years, its been a spiral downwards since then really.lol. I am a 'cutter' as some people call it but i dont want to kill myself even tho somtimes i have thought about it. But thank you for reading and i hope you enjoyed it. I know its no Mona Lisa in the poetry world.lol.
Love D

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