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You Weren't There
Contributed by
JustAGirl001
on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 11:29:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Where were you when I was dying,
what were you doing when I was crying?
You weren't there when I was grievin,
and I'm sick of you decievin,
So I've packed up my stuff,
and now I'm leavin.
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JustAGirl001
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2005-06-24 23:29:09]
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Re: You Weren't There
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by justme03 on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 07:50:54 PM AEST
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ive felt that way before. i like the last two lines.
i dont kno why, it just sounds cool
nice write
keep up the good work
i have to say...i envy how u can say so much using so little words and still makes it beautiful.
(hugs)
lylas
~Kortnie~ |
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