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These Tears I Cry
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 09:35:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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these tears i cry continue to fall
let them wash away it all
slowly slipping into the past
crying out, falling too fast
mouth dry and throat sore
i wont cry out anymore
nothing special i will die
but i cant stop these tears i cry
rolling over my beat cheeks
scabs build up over weeks
re-open an old cut
with the knife, open up
nothing left in this strife
no longer can i live this life
i cant stop these feelings inside
i cant stop these tears i cry
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Re: These Tears I Cry
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 09:46:11 PM AEST
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good write, jennie. and i do have 2 shoulders you could cry on you know! wow, you and i (for best friends) can be so different. you cry your pain, i can't- it's too hard for me. keep up the good work and don't give up on me, jennie!!!!
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Re: These Tears I Cry
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by Shorty_88 on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 10:23:16 PM AEST
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I just read your poem and i loved it. It was very realistic and i have definately felt that way. i think alot of people will be able to relate to what you have written.
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Re: These Tears I Cry
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by Masked_Man on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 10:33:46 PM AEST
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emotional poetry?
no
sad
dark
suicidal
even self struggling,
but far more than emotional-
great write all the same..
peace to you-
MM
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