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By My Tears
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 09:19:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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no one cares, no one understands
no one's there to hold my hand
i stand with my arms spread on the ledge
no one pulls me away from the edge
falling forward i close my eyes
then comes free fall from the skies
then, just like that, im now dead
you find me with a bullet in my head
see, you didnt care, so i didnt stop
you always had to be at the top
dark circles pasted around my closed eyes
proof of past nights when i stayed up and cried
now that im dead, your burden is gone
i know how quickly you will move on
so i do not hesitate tonight on the ledge
and by my own tears i will fall off the edge...
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2005-06-24 21:19:44]
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Re: By My Tears
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by ABySs on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 01:54:08 AM AEST
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this one hit a spot even tho i hate to admit to it
feel free to msg me i might not be able to help
but it never hurts to talk to someone thats been
there and knows wats its like to think those thing
late at night
good write
hope you find some peace on the inside |
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Re: By My Tears
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 08:51:10 PM AEST
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look to your right... i'm on the edge too... i wrote a poem to prove it, too. but we are Dying Alone Together with abby, too! remember, neither of us is to let go yet, although i really want to!! damn life, why does it have to pull us down?!?! please don't give up on me, jennie. don't give into suicide, we have to be stronger than it!! don't give up, jennie!!! be strong!!
huggs,
~sprints
p.s. good write! keep up the good work! |
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