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The pieces fall together, this struggling puzzle of life
The picture complete is better, then lonely shards of strife

The image so beautiful; centered and secure
The color so vivid, without a chance of fading or becoming impure

The veiw grasping for attention, the sight beaming with power
The ability to show feeling without mention, and giving love without the thorns of a rose flower

The touch of color creating the very essence of meaning
A red so bright, could only come from torn skin bleeding

The lost blood as the ink, and the black rose as the quill
The life as the sacrafice, for the show of love to be fulfilled
. . .
Written in blood, laid the words and the broken soul
"I died for love" - The story so easily told
Of another life - love stole

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Inscribed In Blood

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 08:10:18 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Inscribed In Blood

The pieces fall together, this struggling puzzle of life
The picture complete is better, then lonely shards of strife

The image so beautiful; centered and secure
The color so vivid, without a chance of fading or becoming impure

The veiw grasping for attention, the sight beaming with power
The ability to show feeling without mention, and giving love without the thorns of a rose flower

The touch of color creating the very essence of meaning
A red so bright, could only come from torn skin bleeding

The lost blood as the ink, and the black rose as the quill
The life as the sacrafice, for the show of love to be fulfilled
. . .
Written in blood, laid the words and the broken soul
"I died for love" - The story so easily told
Of another life - love stole

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Re: Inscribed In Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 08:18:43 PM AEST
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and how could you think that i might have a slim chance of not liking this. this is one of the first poems ive ever read where i actually saw an image in it, i saw a hand writing with a blackrose. your beginning i loved, your ending i cannot help but keep reading. well done, big bro, im proud of you. ::steals the piece for her own collection:: i might have to get you published instead of myself at this rate =]

Re: Inscribed In Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by heartbroken4ever on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 08:33:36 PM AEST
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So beautiful. Just promise me u won't die for me i won't allow that. This is by far my favorite. I need my own copy love. Love You

Your Angel
Amber

Re: Inscribed In Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 09:00:34 PM AEST
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excellent piece... very expressional and emotional. i liked how you were able to show all of this happening and you used a good choice of words! keep up the good work! and i hope everything is all right for you!!

~sprints

Re: Inscribed In Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 09:18:25 PM AEST
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your words become you:

"The image so beautiful; centered and secure"

wonderful..I loved it.

B

Re: Inscribed In Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Rikki on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 09:22:18 PM AEST
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This is so good! I love dark poetry

Rikki

Re: Inscribed In Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 12:26:43 AM AEST
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wow beautiful and dark.
this part i like the most.

Written in blood, laid the words and the broken soul
"I died for love" - The story so easily told
Of another life - love stole

awsome

Re: Inscribed In Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Zeldianus on Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 08:15:39 PM AEST
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amazing write! loved it! great imagry!!

Re: Inscribed In Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 08:48:09 PM AEST
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This is a " grab you by the throat" bit of writing my friend. Excellent images and the phrases were to be envied...may I borrow a few? lol
Very well done
Barkeep!
Larry

Re: Inscribed In Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 10:00:34 PM AEST
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i agree, just BEAUTIFUL imagery!!!
very dark but magnificent.

i could relate to the sense of sadness in this poem. very moving.

well done clark

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