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MAN.........

What Is It That You Seek?
Well, Come On In Then
If YOU Must !
Come On In And
TAKE A PEEK!

Do You Like What You See?
Does It Scare You To Death???
I wish I Could Make It Pretty For You,
But....
It's Been Made
Such A Mess.

Laura Horner
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Take A Peek

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 11:48:31 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

What Is It That YOU Want?

MAN.........

What Is It That You Seek?
Well, Come On In Then
If YOU Must !
Come On In And
TAKE A PEEK!

Do You Like What You See?
Does It Scare You To Death???
I wish I Could Make It Pretty For You,
But....
It's Been Made
Such A Mess.

Laura Horner
6-24-05

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Re: Take A Peek (User Rating: 1 )
by Sad-one on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 01:14:40 PM AEST
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Just a little confusing at first, it took about 3 reads for me to understand, but now that I do, I know its a great write.I see the anger.KEEP WRITING!

Re: Take A Peek (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 02:44:15 PM AEST
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Very strong!! and spoken with such venom! keep up the good writing. dw

Re: Take A Peek (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 04:25:55 PM AEST
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A clever write regarding one's inner state....anger, as I see it.

Welcome back, Laura, I haven't seen you post for awhile. Too busy with your travels I suppose.

Good to see you back, me friend

Will

Re: Take A Peek (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 04:52:11 PM AEST
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this speaks 4 it self strong and intimidating

very well expressed . . .

Ben

Re: Take A Peek (User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 07:53:43 PM AEST
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Short, sweet... and to the point! Very nice!

Laurie

Re: Take A Peek (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 08:32:51 PM AEST
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I would love to take a peek.
Very well expressed. Got your
point across prefectly without
a million useless words

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