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Array ( [sid] => 99101 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Red Wine [time] => 2005-06-23 15:42:55 [hometext] => nightmare bring black birds that sing... [bodytext] => I told myself i'm free from hel
from pills... and pleasure too
sure i'm fine just like red wine
but what's that measure to?

i still have dreams that rip at seams
and cause me to awake
nightmares bring black birds that sing
while this field of leaves i rake

i wipe my brow, think back on how
i ever made it through those days
my childhood's gone, like an oldie's song
though i like to listen to when it plays

it reminds me of a smile, that i saw just for awhile
was that before i turned to flames?
a blanket please, or i'll pee sparks in seas
i'm tired of rhyming games...

supper's ready.

dw [comments] => 2 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 44 [informant] => In_a_While [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Nostalgic )

Red Wine

Contributed by In_a_While on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 03:42:55 PM in AEST
Topic: Nostalgic

I told myself i'm free from hel
from pills... and pleasure too
sure i'm fine just like red wine
but what's that measure to?

i still have dreams that rip at seams
and cause me to awake
nightmares bring black birds that sing
while this field of leaves i rake

i wipe my brow, think back on how
i ever made it through those days
my childhood's gone, like an oldie's song
though i like to listen to when it plays

it reminds me of a smile, that i saw just for awhile
was that before i turned to flames?
a blanket please, or i'll pee sparks in seas
i'm tired of rhyming games...

supper's ready.

dw

Copyright © In_a_While ... [ 2005-06-23 15:42:55]
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Re: Red Wine (User Rating: 1 )
by Blu on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 01:43:31 PM AEST
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Eerily fulfilling.
I think I'll have to read this a couple times.

Very well done.

Blu

Re: Red Wine (User Rating: 1 )
by tangle on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 09:02:01 PM AEST
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Not bad

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