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Array ( [sid] => 99093 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Field Of Dreams [time] => 2005-06-23 14:52:13 [hometext] => [bodytext] => While hiking through a field today, I tripped upon a rock of gray, then struck my head upon that stone where I blacked out there all alone. A dream soon took me to a place where all your beauty filled it's space, your blue eyes shone their loving glow, your golden hair was let to flow, upon bare shoulders naturally, as it cascaded down on me.

You placed a warm hand to my face, which caused my heart to pound and race, then brought your breath so close to mine, and whispered only one small line. You said... "I Love You.. yes I do, I'll always be here just for you", which forced my dreaming eyes to tear, for suddenly I had no fear, no fear of ever losing you, the one I've searched for my life through.
The one so lovely, warm, and kind, the one I thought I'd never find.

I tried to force my lips to move, to say the words so I could prove, that all held feelings deep inside, are feelings that I cannot hide. But words don't come so easily, while deep within a dream you see, although I tried so desperately to tell you what you mean to me. I failed for I just could not talk, that darned old silly greyish rock!

Suddenly as I came to, a real world ended dreams of you, as birds were singing up above to rouse me from this dream of love. There I was, standing tall, my head still clearing from the fall, oh please just let me fall again, return me back to where I'd been! Back to you within that dream, as crazy as that just may seem.

Foolishly I realized, and thought of you as I surmised, that I don't need a dream to see..... I have you in reality! Though haunting as it truly seems, we all do need our "Field of Dreams" They let our minds believe our hearts and tie us closer to the parts, the parts which all too rarely seem ............. are captured in a loving dream. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 447 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Juzjon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Field Of Dreams

Contributed by Juzjon on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 02:52:13 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



While hiking through a field today, I tripped upon a rock of gray, then struck my head upon that stone where I blacked out there all alone. A dream soon took me to a place where all your beauty filled it's space, your blue eyes shone their loving glow, your golden hair was let to flow, upon bare shoulders naturally, as it cascaded down on me.

You placed a warm hand to my face, which caused my heart to pound and race, then brought your breath so close to mine, and whispered only one small line. You said... "I Love You.. yes I do, I'll always be here just for you", which forced my dreaming eyes to tear, for suddenly I had no fear, no fear of ever losing you, the one I've searched for my life through.
The one so lovely, warm, and kind, the one I thought I'd never find.

I tried to force my lips to move, to say the words so I could prove, that all held feelings deep inside, are feelings that I cannot hide. But words don't come so easily, while deep within a dream you see, although I tried so desperately to tell you what you mean to me. I failed for I just could not talk, that darned old silly greyish rock!

Suddenly as I came to, a real world ended dreams of you, as birds were singing up above to rouse me from this dream of love. There I was, standing tall, my head still clearing from the fall, oh please just let me fall again, return me back to where I'd been! Back to you within that dream, as crazy as that just may seem.

Foolishly I realized, and thought of you as I surmised, that I don't need a dream to see..... I have you in reality! Though haunting as it truly seems, we all do need our "Field of Dreams" They let our minds believe our hearts and tie us closer to the parts, the parts which all too rarely seem ............. are captured in a loving dream.




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Re: Field Of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by ChrisSawyer on Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 11:22:01 PM AEST
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Some of the rhymes are a little on the cheesy side, but theres quite a few good ones that make up for them. All in all it's a good poem. I can relate with the message that in conveys.


Re: Field Of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by britanna_rose on Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 12:09:19 AM AEST
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this is a very cool poem....nice rhymes...a few cheesy ones, yes, but still, a good poem




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