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Array ( [sid] => 99085 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => should have known, should have known [time] => 2005-06-23 12:38:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => These tears are familiar, as I shake my weary head once more.
Her eyes made friends with mine as I fell into that place that knows my name well.
The place called intimacy, but often known as something else.
I should have seen her eyes were short term magnets skipping through my life,
Waiting for the next path to call her down, for another few evenings of wonderful walks.
How could I wear that hat of innocence again, It out-grew me so long ago.
Take me back to my pit of broken words and hopes, so I may beat my swollen heart into a sword,
You should haven known man, You should have known. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 51 [informant] => caleb [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Event )

should have known, should have known

Contributed by caleb on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:38:05 PM in AEST
Topic: Event

These tears are familiar, as I shake my weary head once more.
Her eyes made friends with mine as I fell into that place that knows my name well.
The place called intimacy, but often known as something else.
I should have seen her eyes were short term magnets skipping through my life,
Waiting for the next path to call her down, for another few evenings of wonderful walks.
How could I wear that hat of innocence again, It out-grew me so long ago.
Take me back to my pit of broken words and hopes, so I may beat my swollen heart into a sword,
You should haven known man, You should have known.

Copyright © caleb ... [ 2005-06-23 12:38:05]
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Re: should have known, should have known (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:51:29 PM AEST
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Ahh yes...bitter. Nice job...The last 3 lines clinched it for me.
Scorp.

Re: should have known, should have known (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 05:42:18 PM AEST
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Full of bitter regret, but very well written, I think. The images make a lot of sense, and add power and meaning to the piece. Keep looking after wisdom, it will make your path a bit straighter. And keep writing.

Andrew

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